on Nicotine Ruse by Red_is_life
16 Jul 2002, 1:45 AM
The serial killer smoked left handed. Schooled by nuns. Abused. He was slow to ash his Lucky strike. Not yet old. Twenty-seven, but moving ever farther from seventeen.(keep up the good work. short and sweet)
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 7:34 PM
Thanks for reminding me. i am outta here. see ya guys
on The Picnic by AmericanWigeon
15 Jul 2002, 9:55 PM
e.e. cummings? I was thinking of Leotardo in what's eating gilbert graper
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
16 Jul 2002, 2:33 AM
Yeah... tell me about it. Those two are real heavy hitters, but i find their logic and wit acute to say the least. thanx for the nine. i'm on my way to read you're last poem now
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
16 Jul 2002, 1:31 AM
Charon, should have been capatalized as a noun. oops. fuck it.. anyway he is the mythological (Greek) ferryman on the river Styx. thanx. I love the peppers. their new album is already sounding like award winning shit. They are consistent. later
on Ode to Bad poetry by unknown
16 Jul 2002, 1:55 AM
Are you projecting.. cuz if you don't care about either heaven or hell than you could probably give three squirts about the difference between a hack or "an unprofane genius" so why even write the poem if none of these things supposedly bug you? Shouldn't you be off wearing the robes of a Samana, and reading Herman Hesse somewhere in India?e
on moon rants by bluwiz
16 Jul 2002, 2:04 AM
I simply adored the way you dared to wear celestial shoes. And correcting yourself, while you go along is fascinating.g
on Flies by Red_is_life
16 Jul 2002, 2:14 AM
Well.. I'll say this. it's good to be young. Take a deep breath. You're onto something. You wear your soul on your sleeve and your heart on your collar when you write. That takes guts and a love for what you're doing. With that going for you the hard part's over. Oh.. and as for the flies...get use to them cuz they never leave and they only get bigger.
on Black Hole Soul by Red_is_life
16 Jul 2002, 2:53 AM
Well i'll tell you as soon as you mutate a little more into some different styles, and start tweeking things around, and taking bigger risks you'll feel alot more protected by " how you personally are discovering your own style of writing". Basically if you mix improv with a sturdy foundation of classical training, do it for 6 to ten hours a day everyday (if not make up for it in reading) by the time you're say twenty seven or so wink. wink (not that i'm twenty-seven cuz well i'm not?) well i'm actually turning twenty-eight in August. Anyway point being money. money. Writing for cash and making your mark. This never occurs in poetry of course, I'm speaking in realistic terms. Above ground free-lance writing. Below ground underground poetry. Get the best of both worlds. Aim high shoot straight don't forget to masturbate. Buck the system. Que no!
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
15 Jul 2002, 5:16 PM
Figures you'd chyme in razorgrin. What no quadruple zero carpetbombing I thought we really had something? luv californication p.s. if u need $ call me
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
15 Jul 2002, 5:28 PM
Dark Angel, oh....oh...oh. my God, is that really you?
I'm beside myself with ring kisses. listen, since i have your ear i just wanna say your Mom called and,"the donkey show's been canceled, but she said dinner is still in the oven"
*Latter half of the quote provided by Evil Ed* sponsored by hasbro, Mr.clean and Dent-Or (the firm denture adhesive)
Afternoon sirv
I'm beside myself with ring kisses. listen, since i have your ear i just wanna say your Mom called and,"the donkey show's been canceled, but she said dinner is still in the oven"
*Latter half of the quote provided by Evil Ed* sponsored by hasbro, Mr.clean and Dent-Or (the firm denture adhesive)
Afternoon sirv
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 5:40 PM
it's time to listen to Floyd. I had something witty to say but alas the chitinious shell has deflected it. I retort. might i wash down your tasty burger, with a draught of soda?a
on Sleepy Geek by razorgrin
15 Jul 2002, 5:50 PM
I've just come into your town with two displacer beasts and a griffon. I have an imp on my shoulder for a familiar plus i'm half type three demon. you also notice that i posess
The hand and eye of Vecna, and The sword of Kas. What do you do. I'll role. l
The hand and eye of Vecna, and The sword of Kas. What do you do. I'll role. l
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 6:07 PM
You shouldn't i thought it worked. not to mention the way it compresess
into meanings it has somatic dandy to say the least. though it is a touch salacious, but thaT'S WHAT I LIKE THE MOSTv
into meanings it has somatic dandy to say the least. though it is a touch salacious, but thaT'S WHAT I LIKE THE MOSTv
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 9:58 PM
Did you know one of the big reasons why Lucifer was kicked out of heaven(besides of course for giving Eve hallucinogenic drugs was for laying with the daughters of mankind, says so right in the bible.Fornicating with human women. yep.swear.
on Take Me Away When You're Gone by Twisted Wizard
16 Jul 2002, 12:27 AM
Hey dude what's up, you remind me of well me about a decade ago you'll grow wiser and faster. Push harder. Keep the line between honesty and wit semipermeable.
Do me a favor, as an experiment, (controled) go to www.gangbox.com and listen to the mp3 called "the salesman". I'd like to hear your opinion.
Nice poem, by the way. Try it in Korean. that would shut'em all up..
Do me a favor, as an experiment, (controled) go to www.gangbox.com and listen to the mp3 called "the salesman". I'd like to hear your opinion.
Nice poem, by the way. Try it in Korean. that would shut'em all up..
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
15 Jul 2002, 5:53 PM
So is mine, ironic don't you think Oedipusp
on the abandoned sea by crin
15 Jul 2002, 6:18 PM
Everything i couldn't carry in my mind. this is a very good poem