on My Life as a Book by molly
30 Jul 2002, 7:29 PM
Fix your second to last line to find true love...naw..just joshuaing.. this is very soft against my mind i can give it the 'hoof' u have passed.the beak is yours. spearmint.horn.sender.rustic.pufferfishn
on Coloring Loss by molly
30 Jul 2002, 7:14 PM
As the young man ran through the cornfield he felt a million ears race throgh his fingers..and then their was silence...his smile was ear to ear.. your work is exquisitely descripive yet romantically short.compact.desirable.generous.opal. you pass. you r molly.your beak sings well
on Disenchanted by molly
30 Jul 2002, 7:19 PM
normally i have this things against moths cuz my first poem well..nevermind..still a witty little ditty <texaco.belladona.mandrake.lotion.fer
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 2:50 PM
this is a fine-crafted-hoof built to last. precise. like a wicked little current set on bringing in the giant squid should be, or better yet, "RELEASE THE KRACHEN!". i liked it i says 9, chalk line. and fu-q bach-ass i've got you're #, and lars is my favorite drummer bitch...fog.hook.semen.raindrop.acid
on Summer Haiku by waltfreakinwhitman
30 Jul 2002, 3:04 PM
rod: a stick or bundle of twigs used to punish a person: slang, hand gun. moisture. slip. lunchtimed
on Advice Given On Drama by Blake
30 Jul 2002, 3:27 PM
1) the da vinci reference that you are referring to in Black Liqourice&G-stringed orphans has nothing to do with comparisons between him and i, but rather him and italian food in general contrasting his well rounded life style, and the beauty of italy all together, not to mention the brilliance within the man
2) you're right about the rest
3) glad to see you're up and walking, i take it the surgery went well? great if you need good drugs call me... if not.. enjoy life as a lame eunuch. p.s i can get you write offs on medical equipment you need this year(brothers a lawyer/accountant/serialkiller/pediatric brain surgeon)shhhh..our secret ???
2) you're right about the rest
3) glad to see you're up and walking, i take it the surgery went well? great if you need good drugs call me... if not.. enjoy life as a lame eunuch. p.s i can get you write offs on medical equipment you need this year(brothers a lawyer/accountant/serialkiller/pediatric brain surgeon)shhhh..our secret ???
on Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense...
30 Jul 2002, 4:15 PM
your comments reflect very little talent as compared to the power and beauty of this poem.maybe you have two beaks. unusual.odd.quail. anyway very thought provoking dal. go on wich-your-bad-ass-shelf.nice 'hoof'
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 5:07 PM
"the scarlet letter" meets "the scarlet ibis" in the mind's eye of a young boy with scarlet fever. poker.faced.fiendfolio.sop!g
on Things Are Going to be Different Next Year by JanieDoe
30 Jul 2002, 5:11 PM
go back to twelth grade quick. your creative writing teacher might still be there...waiting...read.more.hemingway and less hello-kittay.nitros turbo fork.e
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 5:31 PM
figures..fucking manson groupie..your trailer will burn down one day soon when you bbq to close to the awning..your dog has parvo. your beak is songless..you are gum on asphalt heeled upon by a drunk construction worker..the 'hoof is out for you!o
on Mobile home agenda by Bachus
30 Jul 2002, 6:20 PM
i do declare sir..mentioning of my son by name with that tone suggests rancor and total uncoothness..retract..or i will be forced to pull out my kale gun and fill you with fluffy green calcium until you develop a psuedo fetish for the radish. analy.unpleasantly.accurately
on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
30 Jul 2002, 12:01 PM
you know what...after i finish a-cup of joe and my morning marlboro. i am going to write the governor of new mexico, and recomend further nucleur testing. p.s that fucking 'swastika' trash of yours isn't even a haiku (not that i write them i'm just stating. u r not kool. u r foreskin for no-onef
on The Rocky-Horus picture show by horus8
30 Jul 2002, 12:14 PM
mr. cakes. do you like the band cake (cuz sata is my motor)? do you like to lick the spoon after mommy gives you the hand off and smile. morever you are on my list of potential locust swarm recipients. p.s knowing that you were dissappointed is proof enough that i'm on to something creatively satasfying(the difference between someone who actually writes 10-20 hours a day, as compared to a person who does it only after they have run out of kleenex and emails to read and stroke at their computer after gym class, and ones brown bagged lunch. don't make me go there cuz you are one click away from the
'hoof' and the 'hoof', never liesn
'hoof' and the 'hoof', never liesn
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 12:43 AM
actually no. care to enlighten me.
god knows i'm not bored enough giving myself a pedicure currently, and besides i fondel it re-gu-larily, so shoot, oh dark one shoot from the hip
god knows i'm not bored enough giving myself a pedicure currently, and besides i fondel it re-gu-larily, so shoot, oh dark one shoot from the hip
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 1:12 AM
you r a fuckin pauper. mindless. banter. you see not the shimmer in the poo, that will come after you!
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 1:16 AM
not you d.a that dik from reno, sunvalley, or wherever his shite said he was from. i say. two-shay. smash his beak. thanx. mooseknuckle. goodnight,asls..
on some deleted poem
30 Jul 2002, 1:23 AM
This is good but you are bad. fuk your mother. tadpole.booger.heathen.voucher
on First Impression by devotedwonder
30 Jul 2002, 12:02 AM
i am part of the man that did this and from us both i say i'm sorry.
<Hi futuregyrl. i know you. i saw your breasts and beatiful blond hair in NewYork. You're up late (she still had her shirt on)>
<Hi futuregyrl. i know you. i saw your breasts and beatiful blond hair in NewYork. You're up late (she still had her shirt on)>