poemranker ::First Impression by devotedwonder

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First Impression

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

I can't remember what I first saw in you, I can't remember what last thought went through, But, I remember the one song we danced to, And, I remember having to forget you..., And I rememeber exactly what you had to wear, And I remember that distinct smell of your hair, And I remember you almost tripping up in the bar, And I remember having to watch you from afar... So why can't I get you out of my mind? Why can't I leave the thought of you behind? Why can't I forget everything I know? Why can't I just let you go? And I remember that smile that you put upon your face, And I remember that smile while he was saying grace, And I remember all the sad stories that we told, And I can't forget that it was him you wanted to hold... And I remember all the sarcastic jokes you made, And how you said "that guy looks just like David Spade", And I remember you not even knowing I was there, And how that when he talked, all you did was stare... So why can't I get you out of my mind? Why can't I leave the thought of you behind? Why can't I forget everything I know? Why can't I just let you go? You were never interested, so why did I even try? That thought to me almost made me cry It was so hard to meet someone new, And know that they're not thinking about you... So why can't I get you out of my mind? Why can't I leave the thought of you behind? Why can't I forget everything I know? Why can't I just let you go... I need to get you out of my mind I need to leave the thought of you behind I need to forget everything I know, But, it will be hard to let you go...

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[8] horus8 30-Jul-02/12:02 AM Reply
i am part of the man that did this and from us both i say i'm sorry.
<Hi futuregyrl. i know you. i saw your breasts and beatiful blond hair in NewYork. You're up late (she still had her shirt on)>
[7] PawnedTidal 24-Sep-02/11:45 AM Reply
I like this one... cuz we've all been there.