Re: a comment on Somme (A Horror Of War) by Mr Pig	20-Feb-06/3:35 AM
But so much less fun. :p
Re: You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger	20-Feb-06/3:33 AM
Alas, for this poem, it's no good; you've raised the bar yet again. I'm afraid my angsty stuff is no match, (Not that I won't subject you to it all anyway :p). Keep up the good work. ^^
Re: a comment on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik	29-Apr-03/2:14 PM
Please don't say all that 'death is beautifull' crap. THe sad fact is death is a parting of friends, not some beautiful eternal rest. When did you see someone die you knew and say, 'Wow. How beautiful, my friend is dead'
Re: a comment on Lost love by Mikius	29-Apr-03/1:46 PM
I think you misunderstand. My aim here was to make it unspecific, alluring to a feeling rather than a set place or time. I appreciate you comments, but it's not the direction I want to take the poem in. The idea is more of the man trapped within himself, talking to no-one but himself, and torn, cast aside. I feel someone in that state is to emotionally involved to look back and smile, or remind himself as he is plagued with self doubt. Anyway, I appreciate your help and might consider doing something along those lines, but if you don't like this as it is, I'm sorry, but I don't plan to radically re-work it (for the moment, anyway)
Re: a comment on Regrets by Mikius	29-Apr-03/1:11 PM
I see what you mean. I'll look at re-working it. I'm also not too happy about the last 3 verses, they seem lacking in description. Any other suggestions?
Re: Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger	28-Apr-03/3:51 PM
Who gave this a 1 I wonder? Ah, well each to thier own. The only thing wrong is 'So my stallion and me turned away'. It seems wrong for some reason. Perhaps 'my stallion and I'?
Re: Morning Gory by Bobjim	7-Apr-03/3:57 PM
How low can you go?
Re: a comment on The poet by Mikius	15-Jan-03/7:15 AM
I changed it a bit, but I quite like it, as it shows him bringing it to life.
Re: a comment on Morning on Galapados by Mikius	9-Jan-03/3:21 PM
Fixed it up now. Thanks for the suggestions. I also added a new verse, so you mean the 3rd to last, not 2nd. Please leave anymore help you can give.