Re: a comment on A Passing Love by razorgrin	18-Sep-02/7:15 AM
sorry honey. being canadian, my southern-englishness lacks a lot. The poem is set in england, though. Thanks for the compliment though.The poem was just meant to be a story, and some failed to realize it.yay for Christof! Off to ritual studies for me.
Re: lovely by pink_punk_kisses87	18-Sep-02/6:55 AM
my necrophilia poem was better. the "limp hair" bit makes me think of a shampoo ad. "stand up and at your open coffin and smile"is a little awkward."I look at how your eyes gently fall upon the other." makes very little sense. Also, a body in a coffin has been embalmed. its lips aren't salty, they're chemically. They're only salty if they're very fresh, more if they're sweaty or bloody or have tears spilled on them. I'm only saying, objectively of course, that you should get the mechanics of death right before you write.
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	31-Aug-02/4:35 PM
no earwigs, they are made of evil.So, g'night everyone.
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	31-Aug-02/4:07 PM
I like this. sorry horus about the new york thing. anywho, i'm heading off on my own magical misery tour soon, so i shan't be here all day anymore. Your stuff has really cool imagery. The line "have you succumbed today" rocks. Can I put it on a t-shirt?
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/3:53 PM
I just fail to see why he feels the need to bitch to me about Shin's stuff. what, am I going to give him the message or something?" sweetie, that jackass on the internetdoesn't like you." I find it strange that he can't do that on Shin's stuff. Besides, i have already mentioned about how stupid this argument is. he won't let it die.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/3:48 PM
Make no mistake, I am well awrare of canada's problems. You simply are a condescending, ignorant, boring ass who has only made reference to issues in his last post oand for that matter has yet to state the community college that handed him his degree in accounting or whatever it may be. i didn't write this poem anyway. don't blame me. All that you have done is shown yourself to be a hypocritical bore who uses too many words to state very little. Now let us ignore each other forever more.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/3:27 PM
you are of course aware of how dumb it is to argue for this long because of a flippant remark designed to piss people off as a comment on a flippant poem designed to piss idiots off?
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/3:10 PM
WHAT SUBJECT!!!you have made no mention of a "subject"! I read those publications and many others. Still no point!!
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/3:08 PM
Ok instead of your usual charming little remarks about what you think my educationmay be (a variant on the grade school 'your brain is as big as this bug") why don't you make a point? You say you'd do so well in a debate, but meaningless vagueness and personal attacks don't hold up too well.I was merely stating the impression that you give. Sorry your mighty jounalist sense of humour doesn't approve of ours, but maybe a little absurdism can be a good thing. You haven't said much of anything in regard to these elusive 'issues' you keep mentioning. You just make snide pseudointellectual attempts at insults. Face it, you're a pompous, dull, hypocritical bore and someone's finally called you on it.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/2:59 PM
Why do we fuck your country up? Because you let us, and your price is low. America has financed and perpetrated more acts of violence and genocide than you'd like to count, senor journalisto and you know it. I pay attention to the news, dear, and that's what I've been seeing. Middle East, anyone? You claim to not be a nationalist, but from what you've been saying it sounds like you'd blow dubya if he'd unzip for you. My mistake about the slaves. Canada has its problems,(never llet it be said it doesn't) but we have a hell of a lot less than the yanks. The halifax thing mystiofies me. why halifax? I visited once...
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/2:52 PM
your writing: what does it "prove" you do? drive.have bad, boring relationships. sleep. yup, you do a lot.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/2:48 PM
The only american tv he commented on (once) was a-team. Lord of the Rings...the samurai ones(where do you think Kurosawa came from? idaho?).The point is P&K, you have very little sense of humour. The tv thing mystifies me, though, as he only mentioned it once. But then, really, you're just a redneck post-modern yutz who thinks reading his little speeches at rodeos makes him great. Go into your yard and wave your flag a little more..good.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/2:17 PM
I hardly consider Shin to be one of the worst and neither do a great many people. He is not a poet by and large. his talent mainly is in his prose, while his poems are mostly amusing. He came to this site to laugh at pomopus, pretentious idiots Thanks for volunteering. As for my comment, I did leave a lot out. I neglected to mention the bit about the Indians being massacred. My bad. Considering that the U.S. is one of the major world powers, with money coming out of its ass and yet it won't feed its own people and is run by a warmongering redneck yahoo, yeah, I forgot that too. "built by slaves", yep. And then the lynchings. Perhaps i'd have more respectfor the good ol' U.S. of A. if it wasn't by and large so violent, racist and isolationist, all while blissfully raping the Earth.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/1:34 PM
Devil's not all bad. He just stopped by to bring me cake to celebrate me leaving my job. I say this because it's damn yummy cake.
Re: 9/11 by TheDevil	31-Aug-02/1:32 PM
The henry ford haiku is hilarious.
Re: Prologue-Epilogue: A Self-Indulgent Peice of Tripe by Shin-Bojangles	31-Aug-02/9:51 AM
well it is true. and what the heck is wrong with nepotism unless the name Bush is involved? bah, I say. Bah to K??dresh!
Re: Women by Prosper	30-Aug-02/3:53 PM
needs...line breaks...going mad..the voices....MUST KILL!!
Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover	30-Aug-02/1:15 PM
This is a fine example of why we need more violent crime. I mean this is just crap. It's like hallmark got drunk and weepy. read more, kid. that boy in your class is too cool for you anyway.
Re: Prologue-Epilogue: A Self-Indulgent Peice of Tripe by Shin-Bojangles	30-Aug-02/1:05 PM
yeah. it's funny cause it's true.
Re: Night scene by unknown	29-Aug-02/11:14 AM
sort of like bad soft-core in that nothing really happens of it and I just feel like I've wasted my time. actually, i feel that way because it is bad soft-core.