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4-Aug-02/12:33 PM |
you flesh is the only truth. your will is the only one that should affect you. all else is lies.
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Re: Earthquake by ifni |
4-Aug-02/12:35 PM |
that's beautiful. think about the moving electrons in the atoms that make up your body. nothing is still and everything is changing.
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Re: Mary Mother by DevilTmptrss |
6-Aug-02/6:15 AM |
'tis a thing of wonder. I smile.
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Re: Colorado by Voth269 |
6-Aug-02/6:21 AM |
Oi! since when is necrophelia a sentimental love poem! Besides, there is a big difference between the writer and the speaker. I was not writing as myself in that. jesus godfuck!
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Re: The world by hamgurl |
6-Aug-02/6:38 AM |
sliver, in a little wisconsin town in the 50's a man called Ed Gein killed old women and wore their skins, among other things. Kids are being abducted in all sorts of communities. Wake up and rub the sparkles out of your eyes, the small towns have their dirty secrets too.
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Re: loki's end by yarlgrenn |
6-Aug-02/8:39 AM |
this is beyond mighty.gadzooks.
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Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
6-Aug-02/12:21 PM |
No, Poetie, I don't. However I do think you should leave. Lots of people die from AIDS. Did you know that in the Middle Ages, when thousands were dying from the Plague, people were writing songs about it? poetie, you're just a whiny, oversensitive teenybopper who can't take anything but romantic, cliched tripe as poetry.
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7-Aug-02/1:18 PM |
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Re: The Prettiest Mother in the World by rosebud |
7-Aug-02/1:29 PM |
I was going to say something unkind, but that's just sweet.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Aug-02/2:32 PM |
now, now, K??dresh, don't tease him for his muddled thoughtmeats. Tease him for his inability to compose a decent poem.
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Re: Lucky's Day by razorgrin |
7-Aug-02/3:50 PM |
sebaceous?? why "sebaceous"?
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7-Aug-02/3:54 PM |
this looks like something scrawled in the margins of a 10th-grade notebook. oooooh, a grimoire! this must mean you are an all-powerful magician!And you wrote three of them! How precious! This poem is a collection of inane word-bites. No substance.
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Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8 |
7-Aug-02/4:05 PM |
that was great.you tell good stories.
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Re: The Beggar by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
7-Aug-02/4:17 PM |
the only upside of the homeless is nobody looks for them when they mysteriously go missing.
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Re: Joe likes "DYNAMITE"! by horus8 |
7-Aug-02/4:20 PM |
ka-BOOM! i like this one.
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Re: The One I think About by ThoughtfulSoul |
7-Aug-02/4:27 PM |
Some people jerk off, some write poems about the girlie they adore. I'd rather you were in the first category.
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Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8 |
7-Aug-02/4:31 PM |
this is really good.Damn good.
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Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8 |
7-Aug-02/4:40 PM |
the sequel to "a passing love" is in the works. It'll be fun. happy birthday.
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Re: Untitled by Twisted Wizard |
8-Aug-02/6:01 AM |
grr..he is angry.he says "fuck". Feel the righteous angst!
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Re: 2-12-01 by kthulah |
8-Aug-02/6:02 AM |
that is a damn fine piece.
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