| Re: a comment on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger |
19-Feb-07/1:21 AM |
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Where are you hiding, doc? Send me an email or something.
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| Re: A Night out With Chaucer by cleverdevice |
19-Feb-07/1:19 AM |
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I have finally worked out where you stole this little beauty from. Leave the Bailey classics alone, you thieving cad! -bow'ls-
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| Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
19-Feb-07/1:16 AM |
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The plural of "terrible poeme" is "www.allpoetry.com"
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| Re: a comment on Firestorm by Dovina |
19-Feb-07/1:15 AM |
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That does not excuse your lack of a bum :(
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| Re: a comment on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger |
16-Feb-07/3:14 PM |
"both over and under told..." -- how so?
I don't know that it's particularly clever, I just wanted to muck around with a rondel for fun.
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| Re: a comment on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger |
16-Feb-07/3:14 PM |
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| Re: Yet more woe by Stephen Robins |
16-Feb-07/3:12 PM |
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Have you seen Otis Lee Crenshaw (Rich Hall) do his prison rape song?
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| Re: The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani |
16-Feb-07/3:09 PM |
Possibly the best part of this poeme is the rhyming of 'anus' with 'gayness', although it seems to be more suited to a limerick:
I've heard of a brown homo anus
That travels the land spreading gayness
O'er mountains and glades
It runs, spreading AIDS
Look out! It's come to bestain us!
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| Re: a comment on Flowers by Dovina |
13-Feb-07/5:50 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Edna's Christmas Farewell by Edna Sweetlove |
13-Feb-07/5:48 AM |
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'Bumface' is even more awesome.
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| Re: The Ballad of Rakesh Rajani, Court Reporter by Rakesh Rajani |
13-Feb-07/5:44 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger |
13-Feb-07/1:59 AM |
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Sorry, this is a rondel so the rhymes gotta stay.
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| Re: a comment on The Medium of Dunce by Ranger |
13-Feb-07/1:58 AM |
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Perhaps I shouldn't have been so anal over keeping the capitals - it doesn't work without the 'not', I don't think. She's meant to believe that she is perfectly fine, and can't work out why people walk past without acknowledging her. I'll have a think about the semicolons - you might be right there. Thank you :-)
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| Re: a comment on Captured by Dovina |
12-Feb-07/3:43 PM |
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In all honesty, that one was rather a good poeme.
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| Re: a comment on Captured by Dovina |
12-Feb-07/3:23 PM |
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Don't know, never been a grown woman either...
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| Re: a comment on Captured by Dovina |
12-Feb-07/3:18 PM |
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Sounds too childish to be a teenager. Don't children colour their nails? I never was a little girl, so missed out on all this.
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| Re: self-suffocation by Phalkon |
12-Feb-07/3:06 PM |
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And you never actually answered SupremeDreamer's (valid) question: what are you talking about when you say 'i tendons tear apart'?
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| Re: a comment on Captured by Dovina |
12-Feb-07/3:04 PM |
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I thought it was a girl with her father; everyone else's reactions made me feel rather foolish.
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| Re: The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani |
12-Feb-07/11:54 AM |
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"He proved as popular at school as a quick glass of AIDS" is the greatest -=Dark_Angel=- tribute line I think I've ever seen. -10-! And for the Warhammer reference you get double AIDS. -10- -20-
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| Re: Celui by half.italian |
12-Feb-07/11:46 AM |
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I don't think you need anything beyond the third line.
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