| Re: Cat.......The sequel by Topaz Servias |
7-Jan-03/7:25 PM |
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| Re: poemrancour by JakeBike |
21-Jan-03/7:16 PM |
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well i like it... is that wrong?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Jan-03/5:47 PM |
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i know you had an offer to get this published. why don't you freakin take it? remember kindergarden: SHARING IS CARING thats all i have to say
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| Re: Why my cock attracts idiots by horus8 |
24-Jan-03/5:50 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Jan-03/5:50 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
26-Jan-03/6:45 PM |
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aww poor baby is all emotionally fucked. can i say that on the internet? anyway. at least you're direct. but the last two lines are good. its some type of thought process that we all go through. i think... but sort of like thinking things and then chastising ourselves for even thinking them. does that make sense?
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26-Jan-03/6:54 PM |
i think the words are too big for my little mind. but after aquiring a dictionary (the two-set oxford one complete with magnifying glass) i think that you need to publish your poetry or go in a hole because you know its good. so why don't you publish??????
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| Re: Hurt by alainna |
26-Jan-03/7:30 PM |
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i guess if i was into the lovey-dovey mushy poetry i would have given it a better rating. but honestly. give it up... get drunk and forget about it
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| Re: The Magical Hairy Chair by Nagi |
26-Jan-03/7:31 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jan-03/4:46 PM |
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don't know what it feels like to move around but perhaps the dead bodies in the fields will make you feel better ;)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jan-03/4:48 PM |
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i'm guessing this one is about moving too. eep. i think you need to stay away from matches because it could be dangerous for the commonwealth of pennsylvania... yea. otherwise its a very ducky poem :o)
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28-Jan-03/4:52 PM |
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eep suicide. be happy! do drugs!
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28-Jan-03/4:54 PM |
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you scare me geko. though you're poetry is good, the thing that scares me more than the poetry does is that its true and nobody knows or can help you because you don't let them
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Feb-03/5:40 PM |
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i think you should keep your drops of inspiration so you don't dry up... we would all miss you
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17-Feb-03/5:41 PM |
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i don;t understand, but the last line is good
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Feb-03/5:52 PM |
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it has big words :o) and great metaphorical value. i love it
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| Re: Summer by MaliqaTara |
17-Feb-03/5:53 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Feb-03/7:00 PM |
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feels like drowning in the addictiveness of drugs
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
20-Feb-03/4:25 PM |
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This poem has picked apart many negative aspects of the Christian Church... and thats just damn funny. Keep writing because this is great
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| Re: Oh boo by Modulo |
11-Mar-03/7:08 PM |
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sounds um like he loves you greatly
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