on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 5:50 PM
wow it rhymes...
on Cat.......The sequel by Topaz Servias
7 Jan 2003, 7:25 PM
um k?
on some deleted poem
28 Jan 2003, 4:52 PM
eep suicide. be happy! do drugs!
on Why my cock attracts idiots by horus8
24 Jan 2003, 5:50 PM
ummm haha(?)
on The Magical Hairy Chair by Nagi
26 Jan 2003, 7:31 PM
haha
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 5:52 PM
it has big words :o) and great metaphorical value. i love it
on Summer by MaliqaTara
17 Feb 2003, 5:53 PM
where did he go?
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 5:40 PM
i think you should keep your drops of inspiration so you don't dry up... we would all miss you
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 5:41 PM
i don;t understand, but the last line is good
on some deleted poem
17 Feb 2003, 7:00 PM
feels like drowning in the addictiveness of drugs
on some deleted poem
28 Jan 2003, 4:46 PM
don't know what it feels like to move around but perhaps the dead bodies in the fields will make you feel better ;)
on some deleted poem
28 Jan 2003, 4:48 PM
i'm guessing this one is about moving too. eep. i think you need to stay away from matches because it could be dangerous for the commonwealth of pennsylvania... yea. otherwise its a very ducky poem :o)
on some deleted poem
28 Jan 2003, 4:54 PM
you scare me geko. though you're poetry is good, the thing that scares me more than the poetry does is that its true and nobody knows or can help you because you don't let them
on some deleted poem
26 Jan 2003, 6:45 PM
aww poor baby is all emotionally fucked. can i say that on the internet? anyway. at least you're direct. but the last two lines are good. its some type of thought process that we all go through. i think... but sort of like thinking things and then chastising ourselves for even thinking them. does that make sense?
on some deleted poem
26 Jan 2003, 6:54 PM
i think the words are too big for my little mind. but after aquiring a dictionary (the two-set oxford one complete with magnifying glass) i think that you need to publish your poetry or go in a hole because you know its good. so why don't you publish??????
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on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 5:47 PM
i know you had an offer to get this published. why don't you freakin take it? remember kindergarden: SHARING IS CARING thats all i have to say
on poemrancour by JakeBike
21 Jan 2003, 7:16 PM
well i like it... is that wrong?
on some deleted poem
20 Feb 2003, 4:25 PM
This poem has picked apart many negative aspects of the Christian Church... and thats just damn funny. Keep writing because this is great