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16-Nov-02/5:52 AM |
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it is so deep! This poem really makes me think, and whoever wrote it deserves a cookie and some tea
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16-Nov-02/9:57 AM |
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you can almost hear the silence... well feel it, because how do you hear silence?? another cookie and orange tea is in order here
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17-Nov-02/7:35 AM |
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to the dunce remark: BITCH!!! just because your poetry isn't as good as this...
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1-Jan-03/4:31 PM |
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what exactly is being asked? but its sort of a double edged sword isn't it? if you take it, you'll feel regret and if you don't the same regret remains. so what to do?
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1-Jan-03/4:38 PM |
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this sounds a bit hopeless. you know, the hopeless with no hope at all. no, no hope left. eat a pie and be happier
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1-Jan-03/4:41 PM |
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reading this poem makes me feel empty. or sad or something because everybody knows an enigma similar to the one you describe. an untouchable or something
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1-Jan-03/4:44 PM |
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looks like the character is accepting the failure instead of overcoming it. like the kid who had his lunch money stolen. scrawny and afraid. bruises. but where does he go? he goes in a locker because he does nothing about it
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1-Jan-03/4:48 PM |
the last line is gripping. but do you prefer balance caused by chaos?
(where was i going with that statement anyway?) but you shouldn't be so afraid to have people find things out about you. if you become to detatched then no one can hear you scream... (again, where was i going with that?)
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1-Jan-03/4:50 PM |
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i'm not sure whether to laugh or cry. clearly someone is in pain or torture but the glance back with a smile and nod is so detatched from emotion that...
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1-Jan-03/4:54 PM |
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thats frigtening. i may just have nightmares for a while now. but i liked the structure of the first poem
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1-Jan-03/4:56 PM |
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sounds like somebody's afraid. but afraid to fall or have the time of her life?
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| Re: Shitetalker (An farewell ode to Settle. Read Nightwalker first) by Another Bobjim?!?! |
7-Jan-03/5:50 PM |
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7-Jan-03/7:17 PM |
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