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Hurt (Other) by alainna
The thoughts go through my head of the Love, the Hope, the Faith, that we had for each other. But then we turned onto our own path's and went our separate ways. Not wanting to let you go, wanting you by my side until the very end. It breaks my heart, even more then before every time I think about "US" I miss you, and I love you! And I didn't want to let you go, But it was for the best!

Up the ladder: How can you?
Down the ladder: Me and My Girl

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Weighted score: 4.8013287
Overall Rank: 11059
Posted: January 26, 2003 4:33 PM PST; Last modified: January 26, 2003 4:33 PM PST
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[5] famenglory @ 151.205.193.240 | 26-Jan-03/7:30 PM | Reply
i guess if i was into the lovey-dovey mushy poetry i would have given it a better rating. but honestly. give it up... get drunk and forget about it
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