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Hurt (Other) by alainna The thoughts go through my head
of the Love, the Hope, the Faith,
that we had for each other.
But then we turned
onto our own path's
and went our separate ways.
Not wanting to let you go,
wanting you by my side
until the very end.
It breaks my heart,
even more then before
every time I think about "US"
I miss you, and I love you!
And I didn't want to let you go,
But it was for the best!
Up the ladder:
How can you?
Down the ladder:
Me and My Girl
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.3333333
Posted: January 26, 2003 4:33 PM PST; Last modified: January 26, 2003 4:33 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.8013287 Overall Rank: 11064 Comments:
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famenglory @ 151.205.193.240
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26-Jan-03/7:30 PM
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i guess if i was into the lovey-dovey mushy poetry i would have given it a better rating. but honestly. give it up... get drunk and forget about it
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