| Re: Beliefs? by RWAndersen |
4-Dec-02/6:02 AM |
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So much said with so little -8-
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4-Dec-02/9:37 AM |
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Never seen concrete laid this nice before
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5-Dec-02/1:59 AM |
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Strong, atmospheric, and well told, but the titles gotta go, how about 'Lovers in Nocturne' or something more general to the poem
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5-Dec-02/2:37 AM |
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I found this more accessible than some of your others, I wish I had more time to absorb your writing, most times I have to read these at work, whats incessant s? This shown me a different side to you & I liked it GW
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5-Dec-02/2:38 AM |
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| Re: Cyanide Summer by cleverdevice |
5-Dec-02/3:36 AM |
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| Re: On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit |
5-Dec-02/3:48 AM |
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This moved me PK, it made me feel for you watching her grow up from a child and realizing one day she'll be independent. Also I wanted to get something straight, what i meant by 'old school' was poets more experienced than myself whos been on this site longer, It wasnt meant as offensive, I'm here to learn off you, GW, Intrasit, Horus, Dark Angel,Tintagiles, your all muses of mine -take the compliment
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| Re: On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit |
5-Dec-02/3:48 AM |
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| Re: tomorrow by deano |
5-Dec-02/5:07 AM |
Tomorrow Tomorrow I love ya, tomorrow its only a day away
(Annie loves it )
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| Re: ice cream by rosiebailey |
5-Dec-02/5:08 AM |
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Ice cream is excellent moisturiser so my mates tell me
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| Re: Spider by Blade |
5-Dec-02/5:09 AM |
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Blade you cool mother -9-
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5-Dec-02/5:11 AM |
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this could be good if more specific, selling a point of which as it stands is debateable
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5-Dec-02/5:25 AM |
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I went to venice in august and the gondola man fell off, i was stranded for 10 mins just floating nowhere---nice poem by the way
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| Re: Chilling Out by Goose |
5-Dec-02/5:28 AM |
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You should carry this on more it ends to abruptly, this could be promising so kick this back in there, the 3 votes a bit out of order -6-
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| Re: To My Love by sliver |
5-Dec-02/5:34 AM |
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Not particulatly interesting to anyone other tjhan for you and who it was written for, however thats not to say its shit or anything its one of those split opinion ones, I liked it, though you could widen its appeal by being more original heres a respectable 6
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5-Dec-02/8:14 AM |
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The SS are on you, there known for their sense of humour (cough cough) -7-
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| Re: the 'popular' one by joey |
5-Dec-02/8:16 AM |
Oh My.......................................................................word !
very observant, sounds like my bro
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5-Dec-02/8:18 AM |
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Well done Mr Faust, a fine label to this whine <8>
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| Re: idiots by w~* ATHENA *~w |
6-Dec-02/5:51 AM |
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This is quite a hopeful ending to the isolation of unemployment, it appeased me, dark mixed with light nicely here -8-
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| Re: We are ignorance by Freddy |
6-Dec-02/5:55 AM |
Good !
But I think stanza 2 could be improved because I wanted to know more about where the dance with the horned angels was and the mockery of purity, at least you avoided patronizing the subject, also is stand on throne not sit or is their an entendre their? -7-
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