on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
5 Dec 2002, 3:48 AM
oh and zzinnia too
on idiots by w~* ATHENA *~w
6 Dec 2002, 5:51 AM
This is quite a hopeful ending to the isolation of unemployment, it appeased me, dark mixed with light nicely here -8-
on We are ignorance by Freddy
6 Dec 2002, 5:55 AM
Good !
But I think stanza 2 could be improved because I wanted to know more about where the dance with the horned angels was and the mockery of purity, at least you avoided patronizing the subject, also is stand on throne not sit or is their an entendre their? -7-
But I think stanza 2 could be improved because I wanted to know more about where the dance with the horned angels was and the mockery of purity, at least you avoided patronizing the subject, also is stand on throne not sit or is their an entendre their? -7-
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 5:11 AM
this could be good if more specific, selling a point of which as it stands is debateable
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 5:25 AM
I went to venice in august and the gondola man fell off, i was stranded for 10 mins just floating nowhere---nice poem by the way
on To My Love by sliver
5 Dec 2002, 5:34 AM
Not particulatly interesting to anyone other tjhan for you and who it was written for, however thats not to say its shit or anything its one of those split opinion ones, I liked it, though you could widen its appeal by being more original heres a respectable 6
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 8:14 AM
The SS are on you, there known for their sense of humour (cough cough) -7-
on the 'popular' one by joey
5 Dec 2002, 8:16 AM
Oh My......................................
very observant, sounds like my bro
very observant, sounds like my bro
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 8:18 AM
Well done Mr Faust, a fine label to this whine <8>
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 1:59 AM
Strong, atmospheric, and well told, but the titles gotta go, how about 'Lovers in Nocturne' or something more general to the poem
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 2:37 AM
I found this more accessible than some of your others, I wish I had more time to absorb your writing, most times I have to read these at work, whats incessant s? This shown me a different side to you & I liked it GW
on Cyanide Summer by cleverdevice
5 Dec 2002, 3:36 AM
you crack me up !
on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit
5 Dec 2002, 3:48 AM
This moved me PK, it made me feel for you watching her grow up from a child and realizing one day she'll be independent. Also I wanted to get something straight, what i meant by 'old school' was poets more experienced than myself whos been on this site longer, It wasnt meant as offensive, I'm here to learn off you, GW, Intrasit, Horus, Dark Angel,Tintagiles, your all muses of mine -take the compliment
on ice cream by rosiebailey
5 Dec 2002, 5:08 AM
Ice cream is excellent moisturiser so my mates tell me
on Beliefs? by RWAndersen
4 Dec 2002, 6:02 AM
So much said with so little -8-
on some deleted poem
4 Dec 2002, 9:37 AM
Never seen concrete laid this nice before
on Chilling Out by Goose
5 Dec 2002, 5:28 AM
You should carry this on more it ends to abruptly, this could be promising so kick this back in there, the 3 votes a bit out of order -6-
on some deleted poem
5 Dec 2002, 2:38 AM
Inspiring