Re: HATE by Blade	4-Nov-02/2:27 AM
Er, kind of good, but you're beginning to freak me out now...
Re: a comment on Ignoranus by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/12:54 PM
'ass well' - 'tis very amusing!
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	29-Oct-02/12:50 PM
And you, sir, are a guttersnipe of the first order! How dare you mock one such as myself over such a piddling, trivial affair? Have at you!!!!!!!!
Re: a comment on Beer by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/12:45 PM
Ok, fair comment, and seeing as I've run out of decent excuses, my only answer is that I simply couldn't be bothered (shame on me, I know) - it is only beer, after all!!!!!
Re: a comment on Beer by Yardbird	29-Oct-02/11:15 AM
Tepid - good word, considering the subject of the poem (I hate beer with a passion, hence the poor quality of the poem - I'm not going to grace such a vile liquid with good verse now, am I?)!
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	29-Oct-02/2:07 AM
Never mind - ta muchly, anyway! Oh, and DA can shut his/her mouth - either say something worth saying, or keep schtum, pal!
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	28-Oct-02/2:56 PM
As my prize, then, can you this time tell me (or anyone else kind or naive enough) tell me what 'LOL' means. I'm at a loose end when it comes to dealing with text-talk or whatever it's called!
Re: boy girl by little_angel_maria	28-Oct-02/2:37 PM
Clever layout and succinctly put. I agree with zzinnia66, this is one of your best. Good stuff! :)
Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria	28-Oct-02/2:35 PM
What are you, some kind of serial pervert?
Re: a comment on Hedgehog's Dilemma by Shin-Bojangles	28-Oct-02/10:40 AM
Nicely done! Submit that one, it rocks!
Re: Heart of the killer by UAFANTHORPEY	28-Oct-02/5:46 AM
Wow! A few typos, but otherwise, well, erm...wow! Spot on!!! :)
Re: a comment on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird	26-Oct-02/4:47 AM
Why do you think they have trunks? No, wait, sorry, I've gone too far...
Re: Limmerick, Starring Andy by MuDvAyNe	25-Oct-02/8:30 AM
Nicely done!
Re: a comment on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird	25-Oct-02/5:07 AM
Cheers to the both of you, and thanks for overlooking the typo in line 7 - the last word, 'phase' should actually read as 'phrase'. Just thought I'd clear that one up now.
Re: The First Poem by jrtails	25-Oct-02/3:36 AM
Nice one, tails - SAFE, MATE!!!!
Re: The Morris Minor Rap by rosiebailey	25-Oct-02/2:41 AM
Another deserving case for Care In The Community, it seems. Still, pretty bloody funny!
Re: a comment on Daywalker by Blade	25-Oct-02/2:10 AM
I've just read them, and I'm on the fence as regards my view. I see the point you and others have that people should accept the fact that if they're going to put up their work for ranking, they should accept all reviews, good or bad. However, I also see some sense in what Maria and co. are saying, and I feel that it's pointless just to slate something without giving some constructive criticism. In other words, saying something is crap is fine, just say why, and give a few pointers on how to do better next time. Regardless of ability, we're all here to improve, and it would be much better if we were supportive of fellow poets, and helped them to progress, rather than slamming them for the sake of it (although I must admit these skirmishes make for excellent reading!). Ok, rant over!
Re: a comment on Daywalker by Blade	24-Oct-02/1:55 PM
There's nothing wrong with being pedantic - it's just attention to detail. Oh, and could somebody explain the feud between Blade, Tintagiles and Maria - every poem one of them has written seems to be followed up by a slanging match from the other two. What's all that about?!?!
Re: a comment on Daywalker by Blade	24-Oct-02/5:04 AM
I just spoke to Hep Cat - he says he doesn't want to get involved with any of this - fight it out amongst yourselves, 'cos he just wants to work on his poems...sob, sob!
Re: Flamin Monkey's by Blade	23-Oct-02/6:55 AM
Dude, what have you been smoking? Pretty good, though, and the scantion isn't too bad either!