| Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
25-Jul-06/5:29 AM |
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Vulgar and disgusting. Awful
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| Re: Litany by zodiac |
12-Oct-04/3:59 AM |
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I like the ' patiently', but the rest of it doesn't do much for me. Sorry.
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| Re: Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
10-Oct-04/1:18 PM |
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A mysterious, yet nice poem. We don't know who the 'Old Man' is and the repition of that phrase is very effective.
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| Re: a comment on A Reflective Window by lukehanney |
10-Oct-04/12:54 PM |
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Well, you won't see me there. And I hope you won't end up going there either. God isn't dead, millions of people care, but you don't at the moment.
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| Re: a comment on A Reflective Window by lukehanney |
10-Oct-04/12:52 PM |
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Yes, I agree with your comments on the last 2 lines...I'll work on an improvement. Thanks.
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| Re: (A)Gnostic by Nicholas Jones |
9-Oct-04/3:45 PM |
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| Re: Clerihews (here you go, Nicholas Jones!) by Yardbird |
9-Oct-04/3:43 PM |
A very poor, and needlessly rude example of poetry. I will admit that clerihews are not known for quality, but for wit. However, this is just rude.
By the way Nicholas Jones = Legend.
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| Re: a comment on Ode to Nicholas Jones by lukehanney |
8-Oct-04/7:28 AM |
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Nicholas Jones, I have actually decided is now a legend. He became a subject of mine when he pointed out that all I had done for my first poem was copied song lyrics (as I jokingly did). From then on I developed a sort of fake feud with him, which is nothing personal, and he became a source for poems. I have never met him, and am sure that he is a very nice person, but his name just rolls of the tongue and is very poetic. Nicholas, if you are reading this, anything bad I have said about you has not been meant at all...you take it all very graciously, as I wouldn't. Thanks you.
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| Re: The Fox by cleverdevice |
19-Jan-04/4:35 AM |
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Excellent - I am impressed
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| Re: a comment on Stockport by Nicholas Jones |
16-May-03/7:56 AM |
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DON'T YOU DARE COMPARE YOURSELF TO THE BEATLES, YOU A FOOL AND YOU'RE POEMS DON'T EVEN RHYME
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| Re: Stockport by Nicholas Jones |
16-May-03/7:54 AM |
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PATHETIC ATTEMPT AT POETRY
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| Re: Cussedness by Nicholas Jones |
16-May-03/7:48 AM |
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Hmmmm...I could be a foolish yes man like most other people on this site, but at the end of the day, this poem is a pile of pointless rubbish, but then again we've come to expect no more from you, so in one way its average, in another you could just be realistsic and say 'IT'S RUBBISH'
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| Re: a comment on haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY |
2-Dec-02/4:39 AM |
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SHUT UP NICHOLAS JONES. JUST READ THE THIRD IN THE SERIES OF ODE TO NJ
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| Re: TWO STAR WARS FANS by UAFANTHORPEY |
13-Nov-02/2:10 AM |
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Very good. Funny and it rhymes
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| Re: a comment on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
24-Oct-02/8:31 AM |
SHUT UP WHAT ARE YOU TALJKING ABOUT. IT DOESN'T EVEN RHYME
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| Re: Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
24-Oct-02/8:31 AM |
I STILL HATE YOU
THIS POEM IS UTTER RUBBISH
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| Re: It's something about you by devina |
10-Oct-02/2:08 AM |
A know a song by the Beatles about Norway (Norwegian Wood...isn't it good). It seems to me that you dislike Miss Tarquin De La Bog (A.K.A Miss Tarquin Del Boy Toilet) would you like to form a sort of allinace against her with me and Nicholas Jones
Write back
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| Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog |
10-Oct-02/2:06 AM |
What on earth is that. I've written better poems whilst constipated on the toilet. Heres a poem for you:
Oh how I would hate to snog
The infamous Tarquin Del Boy Bog
Good isn't it...and it rhymes
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| Re: a comment on The First Poem by jrtails |
10-Oct-02/12:50 AM |
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| Re: Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/6:07 AM |
Excuse me Tarquin Del Boy Toilet.
I agree with devina. Stop critiscing everyone, when your poems are rubbish and don't even rhyme. Don't you have the time to make them rhyme (By the Way(by REd Hot CHili Pepers) that did rhyme)
Bye
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