| Re: Possibilities by Nicholas Jones |
9-Oct-02/5:31 AM |
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What a load of rubbish, however it does rhyme.
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9-Oct-02/5:58 AM |
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A truly great poem. It sums everything beautifully. I wish other people {Nicholas Jones} were as good as this
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| Re: why i look like a man by rosiebailey |
9-Oct-02/6:04 AM |
Trul beautiful
Short, Precise and moving
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| Re: Losing Control by Tarquin De La Bog |
9-Oct-02/6:07 AM |
Excuse me Tarquin Del Boy Toilet.
I agree with devina. Stop critiscing everyone, when your poems are rubbish and don't even rhyme. Don't you have the time to make them rhyme (By the Way(by REd Hot CHili Pepers) that did rhyme)
Bye
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9-Oct-02/6:12 AM |
very offensive,
you sick twisted man
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10-Oct-02/2:04 AM |
A clever incorporation of a sad mood with modern technology. An unexpected twist at the end was incredibly effective and this added to the trauma vibes you can feel man.
Bye
Keep writing more because this is qulaity (unlike Nicholas Jones)
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| Re: Dirty Pops by Tarquin De La Bog |
10-Oct-02/2:06 AM |
What on earth is that. I've written better poems whilst constipated on the toilet. Heres a poem for you:
Oh how I would hate to snog
The infamous Tarquin Del Boy Bog
Good isn't it...and it rhymes
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| Re: It's something about you by devina |
10-Oct-02/2:08 AM |
A know a song by the Beatles about Norway (Norwegian Wood...isn't it good). It seems to me that you dislike Miss Tarquin De La Bog (A.K.A Miss Tarquin Del Boy Toilet) would you like to form a sort of allinace against her with me and Nicholas Jones
Write back
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| Re: Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones |
24-Oct-02/8:31 AM |
I STILL HATE YOU
THIS POEM IS UTTER RUBBISH
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| Re: TWO STAR WARS FANS by UAFANTHORPEY |
13-Nov-02/2:10 AM |
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Very good. Funny and it rhymes
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| Re: Cussedness by Nicholas Jones |
16-May-03/7:48 AM |
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Hmmmm...I could be a foolish yes man like most other people on this site, but at the end of the day, this poem is a pile of pointless rubbish, but then again we've come to expect no more from you, so in one way its average, in another you could just be realistsic and say 'IT'S RUBBISH'
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| Re: Stockport by Nicholas Jones |
16-May-03/7:54 AM |
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PATHETIC ATTEMPT AT POETRY
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| Re: The Fox by cleverdevice |
19-Jan-04/4:35 AM |
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Excellent - I am impressed
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| Re: Clerihews (here you go, Nicholas Jones!) by Yardbird |
9-Oct-04/3:43 PM |
A very poor, and needlessly rude example of poetry. I will admit that clerihews are not known for quality, but for wit. However, this is just rude.
By the way Nicholas Jones = Legend.
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| Re: (A)Gnostic by Nicholas Jones |
9-Oct-04/3:45 PM |
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| Re: Old Man by Rollsoftoiletpaper |
10-Oct-04/1:18 PM |
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A mysterious, yet nice poem. We don't know who the 'Old Man' is and the repition of that phrase is very effective.
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| Re: Litany by zodiac |
12-Oct-04/3:59 AM |
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I like the ' patiently', but the rest of it doesn't do much for me. Sorry.
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13-Oct-04/3:23 PM |
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I found the poem disgusting and didn't enjoy it. Sorry.
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| Re: A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove |
25-Jul-06/5:29 AM |
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Vulgar and disgusting. Awful
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