on The Red Light Man by scitz
28 Jul 2003, 1:31 PM
Like it a lot - I agree with Horus8 however "of conscience" seems to muddy the last line. 8
replying on Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b by cacophony
13 Jun 2003, 11:43 AM
ah... now that explains my aching belly and the wierd shine in the bottom of my loo!
on The plains of Africa by horus8
19 Nov 2002, 1:20 PM
Strangely enjoyable. If only for the image of a buggered baboon smiling while it limps away (there's always someone worse off I guess).
on Living Conditions by Christof
25 Oct 2002, 1:26 PM
After spending last weekend on the Yorkshire coastline the first 3 lines seem very pertinant. A good read.
Thanks for your comments (Christof also). You are of course right. The last 4 lines were originally 8 which I didn't like so re-did just before I posted. On the spur of the moment I was quite pleased with myself but in the harsh light of day I can see that it doesn't work all that well.
replying on Bishop Stortford by cacophony
12 Oct 2002, 5:23 AM
Unfortunately I can't fall back on sleep as an excuse - sheer stupidity was my downfall.
on The First Poem by jrtails
9 Oct 2002, 12:19 PM
Still smiling five minutes and two poems later