Re: The Red Light Man by scitz	28-Jul-03/1:31 PM
Like it a lot - I agree with Horus8 however "of conscience" seems to muddy the last line. 8
Re: a comment on Drinker's Haikus 2a and 2b by cacophony	13-Jun-03/11:43 AM
ah... now that explains my aching belly and the wierd shine in the bottom of my loo!
Re: The plains of Africa by horus8	19-Nov-02/1:20 PM
Strangely enjoyable. If only for the image of a buggered baboon smiling while it limps away (there's always someone worse off I guess).
Re: Living Conditions by Christof	25-Oct-02/1:26 PM
After spending last weekend on the Yorkshire coastline the first 3 lines seem very pertinant. A good read.
Re: a comment on I am Cuba by cacophony	17-Oct-02/4:43 AM
Thanks for your comments (Christof also). You are of course right. The last 4 lines were originally 8 which I didn't like so re-did just before I posted. On the spur of the moment I was quite pleased with myself but in the harsh light of day I can see that it doesn't work all that well.
Re: a comment on Bishop Stortford by cacophony	12-Oct-02/5:23 AM
Unfortunately I can't fall back on sleep as an excuse - sheer stupidity was my downfall.
Re: The First Poem by jrtails	9-Oct-02/12:19 PM
Still smiling five minutes and two poems later