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5-Oct-02/1:19 PM |
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I value the content, yet it tends to wander a bit back and forth. I feel the vibe you are projecting. It works.
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| Re: Words of Wisdom... by loneshadow29 |
7-Oct-02/12:30 PM |
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Interesting flow, definitely got the message. rock on man..I hear you
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| Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford |
7-Oct-02/12:31 PM |
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To the point. Powerful. Honest. You did it right. Keep up the good work.
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| Re: No sally, lay your troubles to bed by Crakyamuni |
8-Oct-02/12:27 AM |
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smooth. groove. you moved ...me
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| Re: Waking Up by PawnedTidal |
3-Jan-03/8:50 PM |
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You can definitely feel what you wrote. It's quite comprehensible to a general audience. Easy for people to relate yet very passionate. keep up the good work
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| Re: The Writing Life by poetandknowit |
3-Jan-03/8:51 PM |
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| Re: Putney at Low Tide by Christof |
3-Jan-03/8:52 PM |
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smooth. a picture painted for those who watch the waters yet relate to the vivid characterization and imagery
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| Re: I Think by PawnedTidal |
3-Jan-03/8:53 PM |
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been there, know it, feel it...it works quite well. like your style. To the point and honest. Passionate yet simple. Very good.
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| Re: Lysander cried by bornagainpoet |
3-Jan-03/8:55 PM |
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