on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 10:26 PM
Just the way I like to approach every day. Yes! Life is good.
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 10:32 PM
P.S. Definitely a poem!
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2003, 10:35 PM
I thought I already gave this a Ten, well here's another if so. It deserves a thousand. This discribes my dad perfectly, May he rest in peace.Thank you.
on Here I go again by tadpole
2 Oct 2003, 10:37 PM
Yea, o.k. Tadpole, now I can start returning the high marks you've given me. Thanks, and keep 'em comin'.
on some deleted poem
7 Oct 2003, 7:09 AM
An odd picture, I just can't quite see it. Probably my lack of perspective. The style seems o.k. though.
on Orchidess by abecedarian
7 Oct 2003, 7:14 AM
Reminds me somehow of ancient Greece, and toga's. It strikes me today since I just spent the morning hanging my crawling ivy across the ceiling of my living room. It seemed to flow fairly smoothly, 9.
on silent struggle by princesszoe
7 Oct 2003, 7:19 AM
Deeply felt emotion still swirling down there with the source of your tears. I especially like the 'slice of my heart' part (look! I'm a poet too!)yipee.
on The Wrath of Dan Ackroyd by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
7 Oct 2003, 7:23 AM
A few bible quotes twisted around a metaphore for John Candy? Hmmmm let me think. Ouch that hurts, I'll just give you a 7 and go take some asprin.
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 5:48 PM
Good job Bratsy, Don't allow some of the pagans here to dissuade you. If you don't want the comment with the vulgar language, you can delete it by clicking the red x in the bottom right. Keep it up! 10
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 5:54 PM
Emotionally telling,You started on the seashore and ended up in bed. I think I would have continued narrating from the precipice, that just seemed to say ao much about your feelings.
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 6:00 PM
Well, I got about halfway through this, but it just doesn't grab me. Emotional needs and all that. We all need a little reciprocation of our emotions, Lily seems no exception.
on some deleted poem
8 Oct 2003, 6:01 PM
Damn, how long did it take to submit this? I'll have to try to read it when I have more time.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 4:53 PM
A good poeme but a sad mark on humanity. The problems in Palestine aren't something to joke about. Still' mayby they have a comparable poem about the Trade Center?
on My Angel's Suicide by Artemis745
10 Oct 2003, 6:36 PM
Suicide is such a cowardly way out, And I don't think she had time to repent.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 6:48 PM
Listen here, This is good poetry. It was refreshing in a way. I truly enjoyed it. Don't let the naysayers drag you down. Write for yourself, that's who it means the most to(Although I really liked this one). I think I'm going to go back and read some more of yours. Return the favor eh, tell me what you think of my ink dribbles.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 6:51 PM
In light of your new poem, this means more to me than it would have by itself, it brings back good memories of Christmastimes I'll never see again either.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 6:53 PM
What do you mean you gave up? It seems like you still care so much.
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 6:54 PM
Tell Darkie to put it where the sun don't shine. (Anywhere in his vacinity would be fine)
on some deleted poem
10 Oct 2003, 6:58 PM
I'm sorry, it must pain you deeply. And the assholes on this site can't help with your emotions.
I especially like the line 'love doesn't need words'
How telling!
I especially like the line 'love doesn't need words'
How telling!
on Question of the day by PooP
10 Oct 2003, 7:30 PM
We are here to grow, so grow up and take it like a man.