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2-Oct-03/10:26 PM |
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Just the way I like to approach every day. Yes! Life is good.
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2-Oct-03/10:32 PM |
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2-Oct-03/10:35 PM |
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I thought I already gave this a Ten, well here's another if so. It deserves a thousand. This discribes my dad perfectly, May he rest in peace.Thank you.
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| Re: Here I go again by tadpole |
2-Oct-03/10:37 PM |
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Yea, o.k. Tadpole, now I can start returning the high marks you've given me. Thanks, and keep 'em comin'.
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7-Oct-03/7:09 AM |
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An odd picture, I just can't quite see it. Probably my lack of perspective. The style seems o.k. though.
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| Re: Orchidess by abecedarian |
7-Oct-03/7:14 AM |
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Reminds me somehow of ancient Greece, and toga's. It strikes me today since I just spent the morning hanging my crawling ivy across the ceiling of my living room. It seemed to flow fairly smoothly, 9.
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| Re: silent struggle by princesszoe |
7-Oct-03/7:19 AM |
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Deeply felt emotion still swirling down there with the source of your tears. I especially like the 'slice of my heart' part (look! I'm a poet too!)yipee.
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| Re: The Wrath of Dan Ackroyd by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
7-Oct-03/7:23 AM |
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A few bible quotes twisted around a metaphore for John Candy? Hmmmm let me think. Ouch that hurts, I'll just give you a 7 and go take some asprin.
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8-Oct-03/5:48 PM |
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Good job Bratsy, Don't allow some of the pagans here to dissuade you. If you don't want the comment with the vulgar language, you can delete it by clicking the red x in the bottom right. Keep it up! 10
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8-Oct-03/5:54 PM |
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Emotionally telling,You started on the seashore and ended up in bed. I think I would have continued narrating from the precipice, that just seemed to say ao much about your feelings.
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8-Oct-03/6:00 PM |
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Well, I got about halfway through this, but it just doesn't grab me. Emotional needs and all that. We all need a little reciprocation of our emotions, Lily seems no exception.
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8-Oct-03/6:01 PM |
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Damn, how long did it take to submit this? I'll have to try to read it when I have more time.
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10-Oct-03/4:53 PM |
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A good poeme but a sad mark on humanity. The problems in Palestine aren't something to joke about. Still' mayby they have a comparable poem about the Trade Center?
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| Re: My Angel's Suicide by Artemis745 |
10-Oct-03/6:36 PM |
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Suicide is such a cowardly way out, And I don't think she had time to repent.
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10-Oct-03/6:48 PM |
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Listen here, This is good poetry. It was refreshing in a way. I truly enjoyed it. Don't let the naysayers drag you down. Write for yourself, that's who it means the most to(Although I really liked this one). I think I'm going to go back and read some more of yours. Return the favor eh, tell me what you think of my ink dribbles.
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10-Oct-03/6:51 PM |
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In light of your new poem, this means more to me than it would have by itself, it brings back good memories of Christmastimes I'll never see again either.
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10-Oct-03/6:53 PM |
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What do you mean you gave up? It seems like you still care so much.
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10-Oct-03/6:54 PM |
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Tell Darkie to put it where the sun don't shine. (Anywhere in his vacinity would be fine)
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10-Oct-03/6:58 PM |
I'm sorry, it must pain you deeply. And the assholes on this site can't help with your emotions.
I especially like the line 'love doesn't need words'
How telling!
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| Re: Question of the day by PooP |
10-Oct-03/7:30 PM |
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We are here to grow, so grow up and take it like a man.
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