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20 most recent comments by sliver (441-460)

Re: "I know what you need!" by A. Nomaly 10-Oct-03/8:32 PM
Quite possibly the best haiku since Steven King's.
Your hair is fine
Like January embers
My heart burns there too
Re: For W. by A. Nomaly 10-Oct-03/8:34 PM
Hmm, don't like her much eh? Read some of mine, tell me what you drink-er think.
Re: Diseases dug out with acceptance and the futility of analyzation unless it's at a poetic discourse by A. Nomaly 10-Oct-03/8:37 PM
DAMN'I like your Style. Well done.
Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 11-Oct-03/8:12 AM
I give you another 10 on this most excellent piece, So that my ink driddles might drop below it where they rightfully belong. This one should always be in the #1
Re: standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil 13-Oct-03/6:08 PM
I especially like the 3rd + 4th Stanzas. Well done.
regarding some deleted poem... 13-Oct-03/6:18 PM
Mourn, but we know you can't spell. Pretty good writer though.10
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/9:51 AM
There's always another corner, But I'm sure you'll squeek thru'.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/8:03 PM
One of those raped mountains looks back at me every time I look west. Probably a strip mine for coal, but with the same effect. Sucks huh?
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/8:08 PM
Of course, I've come in after correction, but I like the theme. Sounds great to me. This is the reason I love this site. Thank Kaolin for me.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/8:30 PM
I want to bookmark this! YES!!! On Flanders Field, But so much more. I'm going to read this a few more times, but for now 10.10.Love it.Lets hold discussion night on this. Why my stain, my son?Stain of blood, yes I understand. But the context really leaves that open. The internal images I get are the survivors coated with the blood of the wounded, as they try to help. I can't tell you how much I love this one. Thanks, Hope to see it as #1 real soon.
Re: Facial Bliss by ARTIE 17-Oct-03/8:37 PM
Youall are sick. SICK! have you no respect. Probably not.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/8:47 PM
I refuse to comment on the content, But I can feel every line. Well written.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/8:51 PM
WHAT!!! May that candle never even dim> For both you, and me , And Him. May we forever feel that heat'
Let us never taste defeat. Love your work, It fills me with peace, May these exquisite writings never cease.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/8:57 PM
Slow down with that fancy click and paste thing you've got going. I really like this one, but I see Kaolin didn't care for those ten page prose submissions. I must admit it was even hard for me to read through them, and I like you more than all of them.Keep it simple, some of us are slow.
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/9:09 PM
WOW, for a second I thought this was about me. SIGH. Well done. How are you special enough even with a poem wanker award, to submit 4???? at a time?
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/9:14 PM
Well! I like it. (Yuor incessant blabber that is) but that prose seems to have struck a note. I often write about not being able to write, Inspiration huh?
Re: The Breedling by Everyone 17-Oct-03/9:19 PM
Now I see why you have 12 hits and only 2 comments. Grow up!
regarding some deleted poem... 17-Oct-03/10:27 PM
You are here. You are one of us. I question that every day. I just lost an Annie to something,I'm not sure. I wish that walking a mile in your sodden shoes could bring you back. I would show you the truth.Perhaps you might see it?
Re: Facial Bliss by ARTIE 17-Oct-03/11:24 PM
I'm about to use a spanky to wipe up your silly ass. Ms? Ms? Are you trying to piss me off? I'm a woman Like youre gay. (hope yer not a fag)Still, 5
Re: some say somewhat truth by earthwaterair 27-Oct-03/6:33 PM
I liked it. It speaks from the heart. May the Sacred Heart of Jesus have mercy on us.


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