Re: "I know what you need!" by A. Nomaly |
10-Oct-03/8:32 PM |
Quite possibly the best haiku since Steven King's.
Your hair is fine
Like January embers
My heart burns there too
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Re: For W. by A. Nomaly |
10-Oct-03/8:34 PM |
Hmm, don't like her much eh? Read some of mine, tell me what you drink-er think.
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Re: Diseases dug out with acceptance and the futility of analyzation unless it's at a poetic discourse by A. Nomaly |
10-Oct-03/8:37 PM |
DAMN'I like your Style. Well done.
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Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
11-Oct-03/8:12 AM |
I give you another 10 on this most excellent piece, So that my ink driddles might drop below it where they rightfully belong. This one should always be in the #1
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Re: standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil |
13-Oct-03/6:08 PM |
I especially like the 3rd + 4th Stanzas. Well done.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
13-Oct-03/6:18 PM |
Mourn, but we know you can't spell. Pretty good writer though.10
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Oct-03/9:51 AM |
There's always another corner, But I'm sure you'll squeek thru'.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Oct-03/8:03 PM |
One of those raped mountains looks back at me every time I look west. Probably a strip mine for coal, but with the same effect. Sucks huh?
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Oct-03/8:08 PM |
Of course, I've come in after correction, but I like the theme. Sounds great to me. This is the reason I love this site. Thank Kaolin for me.
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17-Oct-03/8:30 PM |
I want to bookmark this! YES!!! On Flanders Field, But so much more. I'm going to read this a few more times, but for now 10.10.Love it.Lets hold discussion night on this. Why my stain, my son?Stain of blood, yes I understand. But the context really leaves that open. The internal images I get are the survivors coated with the blood of the wounded, as they try to help. I can't tell you how much I love this one. Thanks, Hope to see it as #1 real soon.
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Re: Facial Bliss by ARTIE |
17-Oct-03/8:37 PM |
Youall are sick. SICK! have you no respect. Probably not.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Oct-03/8:47 PM |
I refuse to comment on the content, But I can feel every line. Well written.
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17-Oct-03/8:51 PM |
WHAT!!! May that candle never even dim> For both you, and me , And Him. May we forever feel that heat'
Let us never taste defeat. Love your work, It fills me with peace, May these exquisite writings never cease.
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17-Oct-03/8:57 PM |
Slow down with that fancy click and paste thing you've got going. I really like this one, but I see Kaolin didn't care for those ten page prose submissions. I must admit it was even hard for me to read through them, and I like you more than all of them.Keep it simple, some of us are slow.
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17-Oct-03/9:09 PM |
WOW, for a second I thought this was about me. SIGH. Well done. How are you special enough even with a poem wanker award, to submit 4???? at a time?
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17-Oct-03/9:14 PM |
Well! I like it. (Yuor incessant blabber that is) but that prose seems to have struck a note. I often write about not being able to write, Inspiration huh?
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Re: The Breedling by Everyone |
17-Oct-03/9:19 PM |
Now I see why you have 12 hits and only 2 comments. Grow up!
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regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Oct-03/10:27 PM |
You are here. You are one of us. I question that every day. I just lost an Annie to something,I'm not sure. I wish that walking a mile in your sodden shoes could bring you back. I would show you the truth.Perhaps you might see it?
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Re: Facial Bliss by ARTIE |
17-Oct-03/11:24 PM |
I'm about to use a spanky to wipe up your silly ass. Ms? Ms? Are you trying to piss me off? I'm a woman Like youre gay. (hope yer not a fag)Still, 5
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Re: some say somewhat truth by earthwaterair |
27-Oct-03/6:33 PM |
I liked it. It speaks from the heart. May the Sacred Heart of Jesus have mercy on us.
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