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The Breedling (Haiku) by Everyone
Nestling in a pouch of jellied flab and mucus: Marsupial Boy

Up the ladder: sick love
Down the ladder: Insurance Frauds

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.1666665
Weighted score: 5.0448236
Overall Rank: 6989
Posted: October 17, 2003 10:16 AM PDT; Last modified: October 17, 2003 10:16 AM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Oct-03/7:33 PM | Reply
The Cornling (ahchoo) by Somebody, dear god anybody!

Crouching under shucks
of Orville Redinbahchers'.
Soon his nuts will pop.
[3] sliver @ 65.178.200.200 | 17-Oct-03/9:19 PM | Reply
Now I see why you have 12 hits and only 2 comments. Grow up!
[n/a] Everyone @ 195.157.153.253 > sliver | 23-Oct-03/6:46 AM | Reply
Fuck you, buddy!
[8] little_big_nose @ 216.207.132.135 | 7-Jan-04/6:41 PM | Reply
shut up all of you, everyone, you did a good job with this, everybody else, shut up
[n/a] Everyone @ 81.128.246.227 > little_big_nose | 8-Jan-04/1:23 AM | Reply
No; I didn't do a good job. You shut up! Everyone just shut up!!! THIS SITE IS FOR CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY!!!!!!!!!!!11111
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