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Closed Doors (Free verse) by the indign
the doors have closed,
we're not quite sure where they led.
it doesn't matter, it couldn't have been anywhere so nice
as here.
but behind the doors good times were shared
by those who loved and those
who felt something more important than the desparate need
to be complete.
we shared so much,
yet so little.
but now the doors have closed
and the path starts anew again.
we've lost our selves we gave
to one another,
we will not get them back.
so much for sore times with friends;
it's time to start all over...again.
love is more than a word this day -
a sour knife that forever digs
its way into a newer heart -
a tomb that binds us from now until forever.
into this day i'll step forth
as shall all of you,
along our own new greener road
to riches unto fame.
the door is closed and through it i can see
a bright tomorrow we'll all share again.
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Posted: July 10, 2004 10:38 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2004 10:38 PM PDT
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