Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-04/11:46 AM
but, why? I need to know WHY your image is better than mine. more immediate/direct, perhaps? Why- is very important to me. Thanks for coming back.
Re: Fourteen by fevriere	13-Mar-04/11:43 AM
This deserves not to be ignored.
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-04/11:38 AM
MY GOD MAN! HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN KIRSCHNER? oops. Wrong room. sorry. Excellent point. It tickles the tympanum better this way also. I won't rewrite it though. It wouldn't feel like mine anymore. BTW, your Bretheren should sit next to "Instructions to a sculptor". Too bad the scoring has gotten such a bad rap.
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-04/7:42 AM
On a factual note, all three were together. The elderly couple looked like farmers. Sorry I can't be of more help than that. I was more focused on the one.
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	13-Mar-04/7:38 AM
Even though I snapped, I still took careful consideration of your comment , and I waited until the right image came to me. Thanks again.
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	6-Mar-04/1:15 PM
She is not a she anyway. She is a what. A thing for others to gawk at for the rest of their miserable little existences!!! what the hell is taking god so long.?
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	6-Mar-04/1:06 PM
I mean you are too good at poetry to waste your time or talents here. I hope this finds its way into the chipper where it belongs.(the poem) I am a "part time" poet. Do I need a black and yellow label? HEY ZZINNIA!! Make warning labels besides the wing things!!!!!
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	6-Mar-04/11:55 AM
I know that p/r is not a high wire act with an acrobatic sideshow for poets, so why are you here with us jugulars? jugglers.
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT	6-Mar-04/8:56 AM
you said "anything at all". Should I have thrown a pineapple at her perhaps? No you did not offend me a while back. I think you write well and I get jealous sometimes. often. thanks for your input though.
Re: The Ultimate Survivor by Joe-joe	4-Mar-04/7:18 AM
You chose eddie for a subconcious reason. I saw a baby in the womb when I read this. (An) eddie being a swirling pool of water makes for an ideal name in this piece. Very good.
Re: a comment on Games by fevriere	23-Jan-04/1:43 PM
save that seagull would you? I can use it to replace my face I lost in an ealier boom-squelching incident. thanks.
Re: At The Station by Christof	23-Jan-04/1:41 PM
Nice to see a fresh post from you!!!!!
Re: His Master's Jodhpurs by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	23-Jan-04/1:36 PM
of course.
Re: Sci-fi ode to poemranker nicknames by zodiac	23-Jan-04/1:21 PM
the harem smell of disinterest- perfect! Full load!
Re: EXIT (this way) by imperfect_creation	16-Jan-04/6:50 AM
You're finding your ears. Repeating the sounds of vowels is called assonance. Repeating the sounds of consonants is called alliteration. There's no problem with taking a rap-style approach to poetry, I would still recommend studying (proper) poetry. It will help you say what you are intending to. Like I recommend to many others, get a copy of: Poetry for dummies. I have one. It's easy to understand and a great basic tool.
Re: HALF by imperfect_creation	16-Jan-04/6:37 AM
the backwards letters are pointless. fix the spelling.
Re: A friendly conversation with a Native American by somemorepoetry	16-Jan-04/6:35 AM
Somehow I see the need for the length, yet feel it could lose alittle weight. I'm just not sure where. You could Haiku the closer and eliminate the rest, saying the same thing. I do like it as is though.
Re: Skull Soup v.2 by SupremeDreamer	16-Jan-04/6:17 AM
Whatever you do, don't throw it out. There is a poem in there. put it on the "back burner" for a while.
Re: a comment on War zone by INTRANSIT	15-Jan-04/2:18 PM
'scuse me while I confer with my lawyers. Maybe you've heard of them? Strunk & White?
Re: Chodeling on my knees by Shardik	15-Jan-04/1:15 PM
You're the only one I can tolerate this kind of stuff from. Poetry, that is. Is it? bivalve and arthroscopic made me peanut butter and jelly my keyboard.