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EXIT (this way) (Other) by imperfect_creation In a senseâ¦
In sex,
Innocent insects
Explore incest.
Imagineâ¦
In depth,
Dying in life
Then living in death.
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I'm somewhat upset.
So to forget my fall,
I'll simply reset it all.
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Memories make lifeâ¦
Memories in death make me live.
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If you do not forget me, I'll never die.
Up the ladder:
Looking Over the Blueprints
Down the ladder:
Might
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Posted: January 16, 2004 12:32 AM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2004 12:32 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1589375 Overall Rank: 5169 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46
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16-Jan-04/6:50 AM
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You're finding your ears. Repeating the sounds of vowels is called assonance. Repeating the sounds of consonants is called alliteration. There's no problem with taking a rap-style approach to poetry, I would still recommend studying (proper) poetry. It will help you say what you are intending to. Like I recommend to many others, get a copy of: Poetry for dummies. I have one. It's easy to understand and a great basic tool.
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richa @ 81.178.217.2
> INTRANSIT
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16-Jan-04/8:32 AM
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Isn't repeating the sounds of consonants called consonance?
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richa @ 81.178.217.2
> INTRANSIT
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16-Jan-04/8:36 AM
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http://members.aol.com/lucyhardng/pointers/index1.htm is a cool rescource too.
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imperfect_creation @ 66.141.122.68
> richa
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16-Jan-04/2:51 PM
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thank you. I will look into it.
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