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EXIT (this way) (Other) by imperfect_creation

In a sense… In sex, Innocent insects Explore incest. Imagine… In depth, Dying in life Then living in death. … I'm somewhat upset. So to forget my fall, I'll simply reset it all. … … Memories make life… Memories in death make me live. … … … If you do not forget me, I'll never die.

INTRANSIT 16-Jan-04/6:50 AM
You're finding your ears. Repeating the sounds of vowels is called assonance. Repeating the sounds of consonants is called alliteration. There's no problem with taking a rap-style approach to poetry, I would still recommend studying (proper) poetry. It will help you say what you are intending to. Like I recommend to many others, get a copy of: Poetry for dummies. I have one. It's easy to understand and a great basic tool.




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