Re: a comment on this is what I see by malpaso	21-Nov-07/6:03 AM
eloquent!!!!
Re: What bianca saw!!! by titan69	19-Nov-07/6:33 AM
the most ignorant, piss-poor limerick I ever heard but funny, though and proves that with a little embedded irony and slant rhyme you can have a good time and actually...polish a turd!
Re: ode to boa:w/thanks to the 60's rock group, BloodRock by malpaso	16-Nov-07/4:10 AM
no but I wish there had been
Re: Shuushin the multi-personality total cunt by mr cunt	9-Nov-07/7:38 AM
will the real cunt please stand up....heh, cunts don't have legs, hee hee!!! you can't hide cory feldman in here. he stands out like a sore cunt!!!
Re: Hawk by Shardik	8-Nov-07/5:10 PM
much better than that shit slinger you wrote about the 'genius'. stick to this style here. your image mining is excellent
Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus	8-Nov-07/5:06 PM
that is one kick ass poem, bachus. like being side swiped by a mack truck and punched in the gut.
Re: I am an genius, and you're a stupid turd by Shardik	8-Nov-07/5:02 PM
god damn, Shardik!!!
Re: manifesto by malpaso	8-Sep-07/5:11 PM
thanks, rock!!!!
Re: Remembering Joy by ifni	10-Jun-07/6:14 PM
great commentary on beating writers block and profoundly wistful and brief---just the way i like 'em. keep on writing!!!!!
Re: a comment on Persnickety by malpaso	10-Jun-07/6:11 PM
your criticism is valid but if I could do narrative I'd be writing short stories and novels....seriously, narrative poetry is one of the best genres around but I just get too hung up in the middle of those i tried to write so i just figure i'd try and stamp concept or cluster of concepts and keep it short and sweet....i'm glad you had fun with it, that's what counts!!
Re: a comment on Persnickety by malpaso	10-Jun-07/6:07 PM
what you say is true and I appreciate the criticism as valid. only thing is I write poetry as if mining for hidden concepts rather than mining for images (which is a good motive, too) and also, my attention span is about 2 minutes