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this is what I see (Other) by malpaso
*/!&#'s and the sights and sounds of fog a man on vacation from a job where he is not valued yeah**self pity where you let a job define you john edward's wife cares about national health care and my wife went back to sleep and I see it's 7:40am*** in 20 min I have to do something snap shot snap shot snap shot into the fog into the breath please do not include the poem's title,'this is what I see' or other miscellanyinthebodyofyourpoempleasedonotpostworkthatdoesnotbelongtoyou... .(poemranker and me)thank you, socratic brainfart.

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11500
Posted: November 20, 2007 5:47 AM PST; Last modified: November 20, 2007 5:47 AM PST
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[0] titan69 @ 82.38.69.75 | 20-Nov-07/1:47 PM | Reply
shit!!!!
[n/a] malpaso @ 70.233.136.151 > titan69 | 21-Nov-07/6:03 AM | Reply
eloquent!!!!
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