Re: The Dawn Of Darkness by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:59 PM
Much better and more flowing this time! ...And man 'o' man don't we all hate Stalkers!!! Awesome poem though( makes me wonder if that did happen to you though and if it did I do apologize for that happening)!!! 10
Re: Don't Think Of Me by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:55 PM
Man...Talk about being stabbed in the back!( Someone wanna twist that knife in my back around a few more times please? thankyou! )As for the transitions they are a bit sketchy but other then that they are pretty flowing and straight to the point so that makes a heck of alot of sense. Keep it up. Great Write. 9 Again!
Re: You Can by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:50 PM
I dunno about the befriending your enemy part but if you say so then uhhh...ok. Other then that its a Happy-Go-Lucky poem and I like it alot! 9
Re: Faded Passion by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:38 PM
Ok now you started it off really good until about the 3rd Stanza then it kinda lost the sense of emotions and jumped into a cold-hearted ocean with the 4th Stanza which seemed too sudden but I still understand what you're getting at where as others may not but i'll let ya go on this one since I felt your pain. 6
Re: Down Home by <~>	2-Oct-02/5:34 PM
A sawn-sided shack? A hillside? :::Starts singing..., " Over the river and through the woods to Grandma's House we go...::: Ok but still needs some work man...I don't like to be left hanging and I felt that it was missing something. 3
Re: a comment on Twisted Swords of Love & Hate by DreamMachine	30-Sep-02/10:42 AM
I am glad you enjoyed it...
Re: Elephant To A Man by nonee	28-Sep-02/4:03 PM
I take it U like U's? I hope U don't mind my saying so but If U like it then U'll get it and like said above it is indeed an interesting angle...
Re: a comment on Twisted Swords of Love & Hate by DreamMachine	28-Sep-02/3:58 PM
Thankyou all of you! ( the avg rank of this poem was 5.17 but I had to edit it due to the fact that I discovered a spelling error in it...please revote it if you havent already, thankyou! )
Re: calendared by cobalt	24-Sep-02/3:02 PM
Sounds kinda rpg-ish but still i like the references! nice!
Re: O Man Away From Me by Limness	20-Sep-02/4:46 PM
Time is dealt with on this side of the galaxy but I do recall an interest for some such as yourself that have a nac for weaving thier own webs or should I say blankets of time in your case?
Re: Meaning by Ojiboch	17-Sep-02/5:36 PM
OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!
Re: Who is it for anyway? by flatliner	16-Sep-02/11:11 AM
Wow! I find this one really meaningful cus I was just sucked into it's emotions!