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Free verse № 11962

Elephant To A Man

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Aug 2002 · 3 comments

Yes it's, that I flap my big ears for u to hear. . . . Thou they say, it may falls beyond u'r wavelength. But what is it, that u fail to hear, Is it that, this world is to share!? Were u the ones to shape it in all the times, gone by? We animals did carry it, for all those million/billion years The fruits of which u embezzle here. We sure did, manage it strong. But is it, for U to erase this beauty we share? Someone from u'r species did say, "Man could be u'r friend till yesterday, he may eat u today" What is it that feeling u have, for 'more n more', 'day after day', How much of it can u carry today? What is that u millions of crave for? Is it the feeling of being secure, or is it that something u fear? Do search a bit with in for u gobble up, what we all ones shared! Secure u'll feel if u keep the balance, Not turn it topsy-turvy everywhere. We had not doubt we could carry the world. But since last 200 years, even we have started to fear!

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3 comments

[5] Christof 29-Aug-02/7:58 AM Reply
It's an interesting angle, but the u's are horrible. So is 'million/billion years' - decide which.
[7] DreamMachine 28-Sep-02/4:03 PM Reply
I take it U like U's? I hope U don't mind my saying so but If U like it then U'll get it and like said above it is indeed an interesting angle...
[n/a] nonee › DreamMachine 6-Oct-02/8:43 AM Reply
oh god these U's :) ! but now i'm not going to delete this poem to re-type it all .now before ..submitting ..i'll have to keep this in my head ;)...