regarding some deleted poem...	16-Sep-02/11:06 AM
I take it you are either wanting to getting married or already are...still very sweet and loving!
Re: Who is it for anyway? by flatliner	16-Sep-02/11:11 AM
Wow! I find this one really meaningful cus I was just sucked into it's emotions!
Re: Meaning by Ojiboch	17-Sep-02/5:36 PM
OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!
Re: O Man Away From Me by Limness	20-Sep-02/4:46 PM
Time is dealt with on this side of the galaxy but I do recall an interest for some such as yourself that have a nac for weaving thier own webs or should I say blankets of time in your case?
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/2:53 PM
Sounds like a story about a teacher gone and I quote, " Postal! " but the thoughts just make me think " Eminem " so heres another concept that works...still good poem thought!
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/2:57 PM
Ok...this is another greenday song, " walking contradiction " and I fail to see the point other then what Isaac Newton would say, " For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction! "...." Duh! "
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Sep-02/3:00 PM
Pretty decent poem and I feel the emotions rolling off you....but you got quite a few spelling errors but they need to put a spell checker on this site before they let you post them! still great poem!
Re: calendared by cobalt	24-Sep-02/3:02 PM
Sounds kinda rpg-ish but still i like the references! nice!
Re: Elephant To A Man by nonee	28-Sep-02/4:03 PM
I take it U like U's? I hope U don't mind my saying so but If U like it then U'll get it and like said above it is indeed an interesting angle...
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Sep-02/4:21 PM
Man and I thought some had lost it already....sheesh! A book? Some love and nudity, and oh look a trip through space and time...well kids looks like we have next years worst movie of the year award! really poor references and no flow or go in the meaning and as the title says...this poem is in no decent way. not even worth much but i'll give you a bit of credit...2
Re: Down Home by <~>	2-Oct-02/5:34 PM
A sawn-sided shack? A hillside? :::Starts singing..., " Over the river and through the woods to Grandma's House we go...::: Ok but still needs some work man...I don't like to be left hanging and I felt that it was missing something. 3
Re: Faded Passion by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:38 PM
Ok now you started it off really good until about the 3rd Stanza then it kinda lost the sense of emotions and jumped into a cold-hearted ocean with the 4th Stanza which seemed too sudden but I still understand what you're getting at where as others may not but i'll let ya go on this one since I felt your pain. 6
Re: You Can by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:50 PM
I dunno about the befriending your enemy part but if you say so then uhhh...ok. Other then that its a Happy-Go-Lucky poem and I like it alot! 9
Re: Don't Think Of Me by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:55 PM
Man...Talk about being stabbed in the back!( Someone wanna twist that knife in my back around a few more times please? thankyou! )As for the transitions they are a bit sketchy but other then that they are pretty flowing and straight to the point so that makes a heck of alot of sense. Keep it up. Great Write. 9 Again!
Re: The Dawn Of Darkness by Dariana	2-Oct-02/5:59 PM
Much better and more flowing this time! ...And man 'o' man don't we all hate Stalkers!!! Awesome poem though( makes me wonder if that did happen to you though and if it did I do apologize for that happening)!!! 10