Re: Tribute by creepshow	17-Jul-06/12:03 PM
Sounds like death itself. The demons perhaps? I could descride either really. Final death is of rot, and this reminds me of some of those movie called The Walking Dead.
Re: Intro by MacFrantic	17-Jul-06/11:43 AM
If only rocks could talk, for if walls could talk, what stories they could tell. LOL As an artist, I can see where rocks could have stories to tell, as like dead trees. So yeah, they could be poetry. You just made them so. LOL
Re: ENIGMA, WONDER, BEASTLINESS AND FURY by Gopakumar	17-Jul-06/11:34 AM
A good concept, and with very good construction. So much truth in what you have written here. "beastliness of man," the cause of it all to start with. And I am not refering to the gender, but man, as in a whole, the human race. And the fury of nature, I guess because I am 3/4 Native American, or perhaps others may believe the same, but I do believe nature gets angry and lashes out.
Re: I hate making titles by drnick	17-Jul-06/11:21 AM
Sorry for the typo, it was to say here, not ehre.
Re: I hate making titles by drnick	17-Jul-06/11:20 AM
Was this suppose to be about lightning? Because that is the picture that formed in my mind while reading this. Sounds like the way lightning does around ehre in real bad storms. If so, then this is a good write. But I do agree with Ranger as for the last two lines; To answer all, The crackling calls.
Re: The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice	16-Jul-06/11:16 PM
It needs a few more commas at the end of some of the verses, but other than that, a very good read and an excellent write.
Re: Luke Hanney's 43rd Dream by lukehanney	30-Jun-06/8:33 AM
I love this one. I love the humor in it also. An excellent write well done. (Thumbs up)
Re: only you by celticskatermatt1	30-Jun-06/8:27 AM
What a lovely heartfelt tribute to a loved one. Good construction and rhyme. An excellent write. (Thumbs up) May I make a suggestion? And no ill intent meant here. Capitalize and commas. capitalize the first word of the beginning of each verse, a comma after the first verse, a period after the second verse, etc. And capitalize your i's, as in (I close my eyes) and ill wake up (I'll) Still an excellent write. (A wink and a smile at you.)
Re: A Little War Victim by amanda_dcosta	29-Jun-06/4:32 AM
An excellent write. Good construction and rhyme. A godo concept that those in war would understand and know the depths of emotions and feeling here. Excellent write. (Thumbs Up)
Re: watch by the indign	29-Jun-06/12:07 AM
A very good write. Good construction, and rhyme. Needs some captializing on a few words, otherwise, an excellent write.
Re: Doctoring Stigmata by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Jun-06/12:02 AM
A good poetry prose, and a good concept. The construction and verse is very well done.