| Re: a comment on i'm falling for u damnit! by clumseYdaiseY |
27-Jan-04/3:11 AM |
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| Re: a comment on The Ballade of Hollis Browne by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
27-Jan-04/1:40 AM |
stalk
v. tr.
1. To pursue by tracking stealthily.
2. To follow or observe (a person) persistently, especially out of obsession or derangement.
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| Re: a comment on Reconstruction by andrewjthomas |
26-Jan-04/5:51 PM |
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Me? A husk? A ha ha I wish. No, my behuskéd days are over, long since wither'd away, their dry shavlings scatter'd about the land like dead leaves. No, the years of the Dung Pupa are upon me now; my final stage of metamorphosis before the harsh sands of time slip through my inner-underpant lining, and linger there forever, uncomfortably nestled 'tween the stained cheekes of my rear-bosom ere I become gnarled beyond all recognition.
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| Re: i'm falling for u damnit! by clumseYdaiseY |
26-Jan-04/5:31 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Reconstruction by andrewjthomas |
26-Jan-04/5:29 PM |
Wherever possible, one should always include husks in their work.
with effete colors standing out so lonely,
like wither'd husks in the moonlight.
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| Re: Reconstruction by andrewjthomas |
26-Jan-04/5:12 PM |
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| Re: a comment on bitch on the triple word score by middenHeap |
26-Jan-04/3:15 PM |
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I think swellings are nature's most beautiful gifts. To leave an innocent object in a pool of unsavoury liquid, and come back to find it bloated, pregnant with an unnameable sourness, is to commune with Christ, to experience true peace.
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| Re: Sissy Faggot by Shardik |
26-Jan-04/3:11 PM |
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This is one of the best poemes on poemeranker.
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| Re: a comment on Sissy Faggot by Shardik |
26-Jan-04/2:55 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8 |
26-Jan-04/2:51 PM |
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I should say not. In my youth, I was fond of a certain rope swing, until one day my hands slid all the way down it, removing most of the skin and replacing it with a yellow ooze. Yes, you may scoff -- indeed, laugh at the old man and his crippled, withered hands. But can you order an Irish coffee at two A.M. and have it delivered to your room? No. No. I can.
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| Re: a comment on Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8 |
26-Jan-04/2:15 PM |
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Pimple poemes tend to rhyme, and to make some rudimentary kind of sense. I think... I think it is you who is the one who does not know what pimple poemes are. -10-
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| Re: a comment on Captain Cannibal by Lenore |
26-Jan-04/2:14 PM |
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Better to have the reader find his or her own meaning as opposed to having the author convey a particular meaning?
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| Re: a comment on Captain Cannibal by Lenore |
26-Jan-04/2:05 PM |
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Where you said "It is better", did you mean "It isn't better"?
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| Re: a comment on Captain Cannibal by Lenore |
26-Jan-04/1:56 PM |
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Belay that order. The stagnant pools of seamen must remain.
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| Re: a comment on Captain Cannibal by Lenore |
26-Jan-04/1:43 PM |
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| Re: the small drop by richa |
26-Jan-04/12:26 PM |
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What do you think about your likening a drop of water on a blade of grass to a drop of wax on a candle? One drop for another drop? If this poeme had been about a drop of wax on a candle, would you have likened it to a drop of water on the tip of a blade of grass? If so, then buncombe.
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| Re: a comment on Captain Cannibal by Lenore |
26-Jan-04/12:21 PM |
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I this this poeme is quite good. It has pirates, ghosts, rotting flesh, bones, mutiny, floating on the sea at night, etc. The main things wrong with it are it gets progressively more vague and pretentious toward the end, and the first line is rubbish.
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| Re: Sequence by http://mulberryfairy |
26-Jan-04/11:39 AM |
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Yes, I know the feeling. I was once chosen by the 40th iteration of the Mother Theresa group-sentience to take part in a Diabetes Day parade. God, I hope I never witness anything one-tenth as horrifying again.
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| Re: I Go On by drumrgirl30 |
26-Jan-04/11:01 AM |
With no word of complaint, save for the disgustingly self-absorbed, attention-seeking, whining poetry I secrete on a daily basis;
I go on.
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| Re: a comment on Captain Cannibal by Lenore |
26-Jan-04/10:42 AM |
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Hey guys, don't argue! This is poemranker, a place where people can post their poems and know they will receive CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, ok? So stop tearing down each other's work and why not try to find the positives?! Great!!!!1
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