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i'm falling for u damnit! (Free verse) by clumseYdaiseY
point your lashes down,
picture my face out of frown,
like a princess with a crown,
i'm smiling..
part your lips with a smile,
say that you'll stay for a lasting while,
break my ego you know it's fragile,
i'm floating..
place your arms around my waist,
wrap me up and leave me with no choice,
embrace my uncertainty in moist,
i'm waiting..
rest your lips against mine,
let the bees buzzing in line,
let the birds sing merrily up at the pine,
you know i'm not doing fine,
i'm falling..
i'm falling for u goddamnit!dun tell me it's only a game..
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7684
Posted: January 25, 2004 11:34 PM PST; Last modified: January 25, 2004 11:34 PM PST
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