Re: Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/5:51 PM |
Hi Blindpoetry,
This is just a note to say don't listen to -=Dark_Angel=-. He is a fool, and is not to be taken seriously. Think of him as a sort of jester - a nude jester, granted - but a jester all the same. If you remember that simple rule, you will find him to be quite harmless.
If this silly episode can help your poetry in some way, almost certainly via some bizarre, highly tenuous leap of the imagination, then perhaps its lesson comes in the form of a web address:
www.dictionary.com
The next time a jester like -=Dark_Angel=- uses an obscure word like 'jester', or 'obscure', or 'tenuous', you can go there and look it up. There, I've given you three new words to start you off - best of luck, and God speed!
As ever,
-=Dark_Angel=-
P.S Don't worry about Billy Biff-Chin. Plagiarists are always caught by the webmaster within a few days.
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Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/5:22 PM |
I'll tell you when it stops being funny, my lad. How dare you goad me into shame with a trite and underhand appeal to my wither'd sense of bravery? An appeal - I might add - that serves mainly to stroke and caress the boiled tumours on your own batter'd conscience. As it happens, I never found this affair particularly amusing, and was half-hoping my ever more ludicrous remarks would be interpreted as such. Does that make me half the naughty boy you thought I was? Good Christ I hope so.
A straight-up conversation, you say? Well perhaps 13 year olds ought to be patronised. Forgive me. Watch me now as I try to claw myself back from the abyss, being utterly inconsistent in my behaviour, almost to the last detail, the smoothing over of relations a thinly veiled disguise for the desperate, self-prescribed, guilt-soothing therapy of a silly, naughty bully who couldn't stop because it made him feel like a big man. These comments will self-destruct in blah blah blah
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Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/3:56 PM |
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Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/3:55 PM |
CODE BROWN -- ABORT ABORT ABORT ABORT ABO..... pppt* gale force eight
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Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/3:24 PM |
I know what you mean. My fingers were trembling as I wrote that, utterly sickened that I could come up with something so -- <there is no word to describe it> -- even in jest. But I wrote on regardless, knowing full well what needed to be said, and saying it ere the vicious onslaught it inflicted upon my sense of taste left me gnarled beyond all repair.
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Re: Winter by morffrom |
4-Feb-04/2:23 PM |
I recommend the following changes:
"Winter" -> "Winturd"
"tear" -> "smear"
Thanks.
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Re: a comment on Emily Mae by horus8 |
4-Feb-04/1:54 PM |
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Re: a comment on Emily Mae by horus8 |
4-Feb-04/10:09 AM |
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Re: a comment on bluebells and none by richa |
4-Feb-04/8:49 AM |
Show me the bum you had before you were born.
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Re: a comment on Steve Irwin by Bobjim |
4-Feb-04/8:43 AM |
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=till
Read it 'n' weep dickface.
till2 ( P ) Pronunciation Key (tl)
prep.
Until.
conj.
Until.
Usage Note: Till and until are generally interchangeable in both writing and speech ... Till is actually the older word, with until having been formed by the addition to it of the prefix un-, meaning âup to.â
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Re: Random Acts Of Kindness by wilmayne |
4-Feb-04/6:25 AM |
A fleeting gesture of goodwill. -10-
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Re: I wish.......... by little_angel_maria |
4-Feb-04/6:16 AM |
A giant jodhpur of incompetence. -10-
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Re: bluebells and none by richa |
4-Feb-04/5:52 AM |
wither
v.
1. To dry up or shrivel from or as if from loss of moisture.
2. To lose freshness; droop.
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Re: aggression by ThePariahDog |
4-Feb-04/5:16 AM |
I think 'sadism' would have been a better title.
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Re: thinking while sawin' a few logs by Freethinker1602 |
4-Feb-04/5:00 AM |
A toiling cack of beauty.
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Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
4-Feb-04/4:50 AM |
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Re: Steve Irwin by Bobjim |
4-Feb-04/4:48 AM |
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Re: a comment on A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
4-Feb-04/1:30 AM |
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Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
3-Feb-04/5:00 PM |
hey i gave your poem a ten but i think it would be really good if you changed the first line from "Weeks pass by" to "Weeks pass by like charging braves"... it's just that this poem really reminds me of native american culture, and it would be great if you could include it somewhere. I think its a great image to use charging braves as a metaphor for the weeks passing by. Anyway let me know if you decide to include that edit thanks -10-
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Re: a comment on Soft Speak; Hard Emotion by Blindpoetry |
3-Feb-04/4:51 PM |
yeah sorry I meant native american it's just that native americans are really good poets like you :) because they know all about nature and prefer traditional woods as opposed to the modern plastic alternatives
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