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I wish.......... (Free verse) by little_angel_maria I wish i had a real friend,
one that didn't use me for a bit of fun,
one that would always be there for me,
one that's there for the good and bad times,
one that offers a shoulder to cry on, when times get bad.
I wish i had a real friend,
one that doesn't make fun of me,
or gets cealous about my looks,
one that helps me get through a hard period of my life.
I wish i had a real friend, but for now it looks like i haven't got a
real friend at all.
Up the ladder:
Ahyuim
Down the ladder:
Wanna Be Porn Star.
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Posted: October 11, 2002 10:10 AM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2002 10:10 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.2727275 Overall Rank: 13165 Comments:
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Blade @ 212.219.142.161
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14-Oct-02/6:12 AM
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Yo maria Excellent poem it's real good to see you express yourself this openly and youve got a friend in me
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little_angel_maria @ 213.1.189.80
> Blade
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21-Oct-02/7:05 AM
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thanx hunyy you got a friend in me too
"Cealous of my looks" (sic). That is one conceited line, generally poor.2.
That's very depressing. I don't think I was ever that depressed at that age! No wait, I was worse! ARGH!
A giant jodhpur of incompetence. -10-
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