Free verse № 19977

I wish..........

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 Oct 2002 · 5 comments

I wish i had a real friend, one that didn't use me for a bit of fun, one that would always be there for me, one that's there for the good and bad times, one that offers a shoulder to cry on, when times get bad. I wish i had a real friend, one that doesn't make fun of me, or gets cealous about my looks, one that helps me get through a hard period of my life. I wish i had a real friend, but for now it looks like i haven't got a real friend at all.

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[9] Blade 14-Oct-02/6:12 AM Reply

Yo maria Excellent poem it's real good to see you express yourself this openly and youve got a friend in me

[n/a] little_angel_maria › Blade 21-Oct-02/7:05 AM Reply

thanx hunyy you got a friend in me too

[2] [mojo] 18-Nov-02/10:41 AM Reply

"Cealous of my looks" (sic). That is one conceited line, generally poor.2.

[2] Amelia 11-Dec-02/12:36 PM Reply

That's very depressing. I don't think I was ever that depressed at that age! No wait, I was worse! ARGH!

[10] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 4-Feb-04/6:16 AM Reply

A giant jodhpur of incompetence. -10-