Re: a comment on Losing Control by DrinkYouAway	1-May-04/10:17 AM
Surely it's sufficient merely to expose a single buttock, thus proving that there are at least two things (myself and my buttock), and therefore that there are things external to myself.
Re: a comment on Losing Control by DrinkYouAway	1-May-04/9:31 AM
Moore's Proof of the existence of an external world: - expose your right buttock - say "here is a buttock" - expose your left buttock - say "here is a buttock" - it follows that there are at least two material objects in the world - so there is an external world - QED
Re: a comment on Losing Control by DrinkYouAway	1-May-04/8:59 AM
Furthermore, buncombe. Mine is Moore's Paradox. Yours is Zodiac's Utter Failure.
Re: a comment on Losing Control by DrinkYouAway	1-May-04/8:59 AM
"You're gay" <-> (((P -> Q) -> P) -> P)
Re: a comment on Losing Control by DrinkYouAway	1-May-04/8:56 AM
"You're gay, but X"
Re: a comment on Losing Control by DrinkYouAway	1-May-04/8:43 AM
Much better are propositions of the form "P, but I don't believe that P."
Re: If I was a Child of a Perfect Union by w~* ATHENA *~w	1-May-04/4:31 AM
Oh yes, now I see -- our imperfections are what make us special, what make us human... what make us capable of love. You just keep telling yourself that, you second-rate failure.
Re: There Is No Such Thing As A Poem by Aetius	30-Apr-04/12:31 PM
Frankingsteins are much too thick to hold a pen.
Re: a comment on Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand	30-Apr-04/11:23 AM
http://www.pix8.net/getimg.php?img=Goodpart1.jpg
Re: Superman VS. The Stairs by TanHand	30-Apr-04/10:55 AM
Here is a poster I made about disabled issues: http://www.pix8.net/files/stair_issues.jpg
Re: a comment on A Night-Croucher's Journey by Everyone	30-Apr-04/8:12 AM
I see. The use of the verb crouch (which -=Dark_Angel=- had coined in the commentary on The Negro) and the last line made me think it was about an escaped negro. I now realise it is merely an tale from the outhouse. You fail.
Re: A Night-Croucher's Journey by Everyone	30-Apr-04/2:13 AM
A good try, but all poemes about escaped negroes must end with their capture. Any poeme that doesn't highlight the futility of trying to escape is only likely to rekindle that awful twinkle they get in their eyes when they think "I'm not a slave - I'm a human being". I once had to shoot a whole herd because of that.
Re: a comment on Russian Space Station by wilco	29-Apr-04/3:17 PM
lol
Re: a comment on The first Poeme by Everyone by Everyone	29-Apr-04/12:40 PM
congratulations
Re: saltwater bath by J.B. Manning	29-Apr-04/2:15 AM
DR E CARAWAX'S PROTOTYPE CHECKLISTE MARK II [X] Arbitrary indentation [X] Arbitrary linebreaks [X] Melodramatic [X] About romantic love [X] Protaganist is a bummer
Re: Heat by Shardik	28-Apr-04/9:27 AM
If I didn't know better, I'd say you'd somehow turned into a Mature Poete in your absence.
Re: a comment on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	28-Apr-04/3:25 AM
Drugs aren't simlpy a casual presence in your life - your entire personality would crumble if you didn't spend every waking moment telling everyone about the time you once smoked a meth.
Re: a comment on Love, Fair by MacFrantic	27-Apr-04/4:37 PM
1. Not without some sort of implicit context. 2. Are you denying that there could be such a thing as a statue of apprehension, or that it would look like Sleeping Beauty? To deny the former is obviously buncombe. The fact that you can't easily think of what it might look like doesn't mean it couldn't exist. But to deny the second is equally buncombe. It might once have seemed plausible to deny that a statue of liberty could like a woman holding a torch, but obviously it could. Is your imagination so withered that you actually need to see a statue in the shape of Sleeping Beauty that represents apprehension before you can accept there could be such a thing?
Re: a comment on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	27-Apr-04/4:04 PM
I think you should replace it with the craziest, naughtiest cocktail of as many drugs as you can. Then you would be the coolest poete around.
Re: a comment on death by xunitedx	27-Apr-04/3:34 PM
Excellent. But xunitedx promised me a proper limerick. If it were posted as a poeme that would be even better.