| Re: a comment on Prickly Pear by Dovina |
14-Jun-05/12:59 AM |
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and I stare at the San Bernardino mountains and hope the fires don't start again.. .but with all the rain... who knows?
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| Re: Prickly Pear by Dovina |
14-Jun-05/12:58 AM |
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I self-define as a cactus that wants a hug.
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| Re: Panama by Dovina |
14-Jun-05/12:57 AM |
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| Re: Returning by Dovina |
14-Jun-05/12:55 AM |
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I thought of cigarettes when I read this. Camel hard pack. I have no idea why.
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| Re: Racism by Dovina |
14-Jun-05/12:54 AM |
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| Re: Unclean by Dovina |
14-Jun-05/12:36 AM |
I disagreed with the general premise of your poem.
However, I did see the images in my head as I read it.
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| Re: a comment on Unclean by Dovina |
14-Jun-05/12:35 AM |
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It's also an insensitive poem. In fact, it's as intolerant as Jew-hating; In my humble opinion.
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| Re: a comment on Flamingo's Stare by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk |
14-Jun-05/12:19 AM |
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do you mean 'without' the restraints?
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| Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8 |
13-Jun-05/1:02 PM |
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| Re: A Hallmark Card for You (With Love) by Bluemonkey |
13-Jun-05/11:45 AM |
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| Re: May 10, 2004 by Patsy |
13-Jun-05/12:49 AM |
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Misery is a woman. Ha! nice.
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| Re: Labor. by darby pyn |
10-Jun-05/11:44 PM |
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I like this. At first I wished you had changed the format so that I could see the rhyme...but nah.. I just like it. almost makes me think of a hard core Dr. Suess book in meter.
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| Re: Acrylic French Nails by Dovina |
10-Jun-05/12:12 PM |
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"Where were the color ordinary" -- hard to say out loud.
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| Re: a comment on Missing by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk |
10-Jun-05/11:57 AM |
1. no. there is no way to wonder besides to yourself.. unless you say, "i wondered out loud" or something along those lines.
2. The darkness is just dark and fog. the darker it gets the less of her features are available to my eyes.
thanks for your critique.
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| Re: a comment on Missing by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk |
10-Jun-05/9:47 AM |
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Fraud? no. I don't believe I took anything from another poem. struggling poet, yes.
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| Re: it's tough at times by Jigg |
10-Jun-05/2:03 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Haiku String of the Bee by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk |
10-Jun-05/12:26 AM |
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| Re: Friends? by poodietat |
8-Jun-05/2:58 PM |
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interesting take on friendship.
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| Re: a comment on Haiku String of the Bee by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk |
8-Jun-05/2:51 PM |
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I don't know.. maybe love for king is unlikely.. but part of me thinks that love is what motivates devotion to a queen... just being a lamer romantic.
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