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Flamingo's Stare (Haiku) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
stealing glances in
many directions I see
you staring at me
shift positions
crafting a new parallax
now I'm watching you
watching me from that
angle I can tell that you
really don't see me
only a glimmer
out of the corner of my
eye shows me you left
the pool we were in
politely observing each
other in the murk.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6440
Posted: June 12, 2005 1:19 AM PDT; Last modified: June 12, 2005 1:19 AM PDT
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