poemranker ::i don't recall the last 8 minutes by tralala42001

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i don't recall the last 8 minutes

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

constant and constantly and even more so an uneasy mind and soft eyes that scream random laughs in the air that respond to uncertain state of minds and then the blotches of red ink run and the pillows became damp and the blankets are rough on the skin that sees through the sheets of green hills with flowers stemming from the ground above my tomb

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[8] MacFrantic 1-Feb-07/7:52 PM Reply
the first two lines are kind of useless. However, it winds down well.