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When god manifested (Free verse) by Crakyamuni
She likes the ocean, it's in her form
Her way of moving with the eyes of the ones
who seek her approving, carnivourous and kind
So perfect and flawed, hungry and full
inciting a craving so voracious it's death sometimes
It destroys me once a day
and it never lets me forget, she knows I don't forget
Pretense falls at her feet and the moon begs at her
slightest glance, and I definetely forget
Losing the slightest sense of ever having known
I fall to my own overindulged narrator
the words haunt the logic in my core
Names and places/ beauty and whores
nothing, no, no one, somehow I'm never alone
hiding in her soft cell, the curves sing like the
sun, the arches follow the path of what I imagine
only divinity could forge
Nothing can take this from me, no one can touch what
I have kept for her inside my deepest vein
I find myself here, lost and perpetually discovering
I will never know
My wish is to depart in this light, on this path
until I can burn like that
I want to be scorched by this, I want to be
perpetually dying to feed this fire
grow blind to the dark, and explode forever
only to be one with this, one with her
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6475
Posted: December 20, 2005 9:37 PM PST; Last modified: December 20, 2005 9:37 PM PST
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