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Flamingo's Stare (Haiku) by Bankrupt_Word_Clerk

stealing glances in many directions I see you staring at me shift positions crafting a new parallax now I'm watching you watching me from that angle I can tell that you really don't see me only a glimmer out of the corner of my eye shows me you left the pool we were in politely observing each other in the murk.

Dovina 14-Jun-05/9:38 AM
Sorry, yes. The haiku structure works well for some things, but I get a feeling of being restraind by it in this poem.




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