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it's tough at times (Haiku) by Jigg he crys in the night
for the love he lost on her
she just turns to leave
Up the ladder:
lost...
Down the ladder:
Steak and Satin
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Posted: June 4, 2005 11:26 AM PDT; Last modified: June 4, 2005 11:26 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.672192 Overall Rank: 12216 Comments:
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Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 69.231.16.226
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10-Jun-05/2:03 AM
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cries
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Jigg @ 82.40.14.170
> Bankrupt_Word_Clerk
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10-Jun-05/8:48 AM
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this is art, that is artistic licence...okay I made an arse of it! You happy? What's it like bein' perfect and/or sober!?
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Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 71.130.56.2
> Jigg
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14-Jun-05/8:06 PM
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I'll let you know if either happens for me.
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