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nightmare (Free verse) by rainybaby
i hate life wait this isnt life this is a nightmare a nightmare that you caused i tried to block you out of my head but your always there if you would just leave then maybe just maybe my nightmare would be gone and i would finally be free of this nightmare you made for me

Up the ladder: Unsung American Dream
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.25
Weighted score: 4.672192
Overall Rank: 12208
Posted: March 16, 2005 4:31 PM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2005 4:48 PM PST
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[5] Dovina @ 12.72.33.79 | 18-Mar-05/2:05 PM | Reply
Have you joined the Your Club in oposition to the rest of us who say "you're"?
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