Re: a comment on trully, madly, deeply by Blindpoetry	11-Nov-05/7:33 AM
He's saved from copywrite violations because he can't spell "truly" (unless he meant to put the word "trull" in. Then he's just saying she's a whore, which would give him something in common with the young poet posted beneath me).
Re: Headlines by Dovina	11-Nov-05/7:25 AM
What a pathetic prophecy. I'd never see these things coming. Try something like: Dovina and Zodiac marry after she runs over his Jetta with her truck and they see each other for the first time. On their wedding night they engage in the rare cannibalerotica in which they devour each other from the toes up until there is nothing left but their heads left. The remaining few seconds of their lives are subsequently spent bickering with each other. Now that's a fuckin' prophecy
Re: a comment on phases of futility... by Bhaskaryya	11-Nov-05/7:05 AM
Me? I prefer my women just lightly salted.
Re: a comment on phases of futility... by Bhaskaryya	10-Nov-05/8:21 AM
I meant in the first line.
Re: a comment on Sleep by ALChemy	10-Nov-05/5:15 AM
The part about your personal life was in jest also but you see how hard it is to convey comedy under the restrictions of literature. Some people on Poemranker never realize others can't hear the sarcasm or deadpan or teasing that they hear in their thoughts while writing their quips. Anyhow, no harm no foul.
Re: a comment on Szaehling by MacFrantic	10-Nov-05/5:03 AM
So you're Jack Kerouac.
Re: phases of futility... by Bhaskaryya	10-Nov-05/4:55 AM
First stanza is great. although the "..." may be over doing it a little. The other 2 stanzas aren't quite as good.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	9-Nov-05/7:17 PM
I just found out it is. For God sakes child hurry and delete your comment. Oh God I can't bare to look!
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	9-Nov-05/7:12 PM
If it's through Poetry.com do yourself a favor and delete your comment by clicking the red x by reply or else prepare yourself for disappointment.
Re: a comment on Sleep by ALChemy	9-Nov-05/8:05 AM
Couldn't resist nitpicking. Is "ofcourse" actually accepted as a word. Thanks for the compliment. Many of the best sonnets break the rules a little. What about the "Till then" you forgot to mention that too.
Re: Forgive Me by TLRufener	9-Nov-05/8:02 AM
Answer: "Some day, and that day may never come, I will call upon you to do a service for me..."
Re: a comment on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya	9-Nov-05/7:47 AM
You do have potential.
Re: a comment on Sleep by ALChemy	9-Nov-05/7:46 AM
Oh a warning. If you nitpick little things like spelling in peoples comments and replies (unless for comedic reasons like when for instance a girl writes calk when what she really wants is cock) then folks will stop bothering to talk to you altogether. Which may or may not explain your popularity in your personal life.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	9-Nov-05/7:07 AM
Just wait till you hit 30 my friend.
Re: a comment on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya	9-Nov-05/7:03 AM
There's no concrete evidence to support Mary Magdalene was even a prostitute. It's just as likely she was the mother of The Christ's child that is if you choose to be at the other gullible end of the spectrum. Hey, I've come to realize that just about every Indian (is that the right term) I've met has had a better english vocabulary then most southerners. I myself don't know a damn word of indian.
Re: Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa	8-Nov-05/3:25 PM
Is this you? http://www.rame.net/aarle/pics/MonaLisa.jpg If so, Bravo.
Re: a comment on The Other by Caducus	8-Nov-05/1:50 PM
Silly, only boys have a Mr Turtle.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/1:30 PM
I didn't omit you from the genre. But admit it. No body does crap like DA.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	8-Nov-05/1:15 PM
Dough!! My bad.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/12:21 PM
That would be DA's genre.