Re: a comment on The Other by Caducus	8-Nov-05/12:16 PM
What, you've never played Mr Turtle come out of your shell?
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	8-Nov-05/12:14 PM
Don't worry I'm of legal age for consent;)
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/6:49 AM
Maybe we should great each other by saying "Well hello there honky and how are you this fine day." True but Dovina still doesn't seem to understand how them negroes are.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	8-Nov-05/6:42 AM
And for the next few years have Just about the greatest gosh darn boss the world has ever been fortunate enough to know. GWB.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/6:34 AM
I've worked in constuction too. Which either counter-acts that or makes me one of the Village People. Imagine if they knew I wrote poetry?
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	8-Nov-05/6:17 AM
Your 26? Damn I'm an under achiever.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/6:05 AM
Already forgiven.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/6:04 AM
Even more so.
Re: The Other by Caducus	8-Nov-05/6:02 AM
I think you should drop "on fridays" to help the rhythm of the poem flow better. Feels like the melancholy you see in a lot of those indie films. Bed tortoise: Great image. You can really tell the wording was well thought out.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/5:11 AM
How's that for irony?
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/5:10 AM
Thank you. I hope those ideas don't get you in trouble.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/5:08 AM
Thank you. You saved me the effort of arguing genius.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/5:06 AM
Actually come to think of it I did mean all black people when I said "When black people stop calling each other Pimp, Nigga etc." Would you rather some black people stop doing it and some continue or all of them stop doing it. Yes, some already don't but their automatically include into the all that don't. I will concede "Stop" should have been "aren't". It must be the racist in me slipping out again. You really should admit you're knit-picking at this.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/4:24 AM
A poem mocking and criticizing racist stereotyping appears racist to you. How is that not ironic. Irony: An expression or utterance marked by a deliberate contrast between apparent and intended meaning. Or maybe your definition is "like ra-a-ain on your wedding day..."
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/4:15 AM
If it was all black people I would have said ALL black people genius.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/4:13 AM
No surprise you say "writing a witty comeback against an ass" seeing your head is stuck so far up yours that you don't know when to give up. Or is your idea to clog up my poem's comment section with your inane filibustering until I finally start deleting them and then say "Ha! See. Don't bother. Unlike you I can move on from criticism.
Re: I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya	8-Nov-05/2:20 AM
"Roxanne! You don't have to put on the red light..." Your use of whom is pretentious and wrong. See usage note: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=who Some letters are missing after your apostrophes.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/1:36 AM
Wow! What a comeback. What's next "I know you are but what am I"? Oh, You are a dick. Try denying that one Richard. <:o
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/1:29 AM
What is ironic is you think it's racist when the poem is actually about perpetuating racism. In this way I really mean it. The first word is "Rid" as in get rid of all these stereotypes. To use words like "Nigger" as only a kick against censorship is not good poetry it's just being a Richard. Dick.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	8-Nov-05/1:18 AM
Saying "black self-image" is racist. Black standard is the popular image they generate. When black people stop calling each other Pimp, Nigga, Ho, etc. and stop refering to white folks as the man, when rappers stop rapping about how great it is to be a Gangsta, Pimp, Dealer, Criminal, etc. Then we'll talk. I never denied being racist at some level. We all are.