| Re: Happy 40th Anniversary by Dovina |
13-Feb-06/9:42 PM |
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| Re: a comment on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta |
13-Feb-06/9:30 PM |
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Kneeling would be much more appropriate for worshiping me.
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| Re: a comment on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta |
13-Feb-06/9:28 PM |
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Have you fucked any of them? Then how do you know they aren't?
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
13-Feb-06/9:25 PM |
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Funny, I just thought it sounded funny.
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| Re: a comment on Valentine by zodiac |
13-Feb-06/9:21 PM |
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I like this kind of biographical poetry and I'm glad to see you do too.
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| Re: a comment on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta |
13-Feb-06/8:52 PM |
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There is a fucking god and that fucking god is me. Alchemy, the God of Fucking.
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| Re: a comment on In response to by INTRANSIT |
13-Feb-06/8:08 PM |
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Don't wizz on the electric fence - Ren & Stimpy
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| Re: Valentine by zodiac |
13-Feb-06/8:06 PM |
You've surprised me with your choice of subject.
Speaking the mind of a real person you have no personal affiliation with? Dovina certainly has stamped her great influence on us all.
"imagines the future like a train bearing down fast." is a great line.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
12-Feb-06/9:32 PM |
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Yeah, it does kinda remind me of her stuff.
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| Re: a comment on Sonnet by zodiac |
9-Feb-06/9:48 AM |
Nice.
Is this a response to where the new trend of poetry should go or a response to the old form being relevent?
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| Re: a comment on Penny Loafer Blues by ALChemy |
9-Feb-06/9:27 AM |
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I did mean the double meaning but I think it might have gotten through even if I had used the correct spelling.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
9-Feb-06/7:41 AM |
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"whopping great urn" Sounds like a great description for this website.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
9-Feb-06/7:33 AM |
Thanks for the link.
I was looking into the Mary Magdalen stuff a while back. She get's very poetic when she talks about Jesus.
Thank God I kept my poem shorter than that though.
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| Re: Hailing Miriam by Ranger |
9-Feb-06/7:13 AM |
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It moves along quite swiftly or maybe that's just how I chose to read it(I don't know) but when I read it at that pace I found it quite passionate.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
9-Feb-06/7:06 AM |
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No, but a couple months ago I was scanning through a couple articles and even saw a show on the History Channel-(I think) about the Gnostic Gospels. If you've got a link to that I'd be more than glad to take a look at it though.
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| Re: a comment on My Fatherâs World by Dovina |
9-Feb-06/7:01 AM |
I only meant use the ("") so it looks more intentional and less like you were at a loss for the right words a just stuck a cliche in to get you to the next line.
By the way- Love the "gumption" "unction" half rhyme.
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| Re: My Fatherâs World by Dovina |
9-Feb-06/6:02 AM |
Not quite sure about the capital F in the first "Fire".
If "More than you can shake a stick at" was something he said alot (which is just my hunch) then put it in quotations please. I thought it was a great sentiment and quite deep. Well expressed D.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
9-Feb-06/5:53 AM |
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No, I'm thinking his humor is more pot induced sarcasm and so is best a-la bong.
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| Re: a comment on Lonely Road by drnick |
9-Feb-06/5:48 AM |
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-Then you should bestow your intelligent advice upon us a little more.
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| Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy |
8-Feb-06/7:00 PM |
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Thanks, I discovered once while in art school that "The Shining" is the funniest movie ever if you're sloshed when you watch it.
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