Re: Mentally Disabled by drnick	16-Feb-06/10:20 AM
I'm sure amanda_dcosta can tell you tons of stuff about the mentally disabled. I like this poem, I haven't read it but I like it.
Re: a comment on Recognition by nentwined	16-Feb-06/9:33 AM
Yes, I did some more research and that's why I put the second comment in. It's the gay poem that threw me off at first. Why post it? Why not a Fraser Allonby is a pederast poem? That would have been ten times better. I didn't mean you're a fan of zodiac I meant zodlac one of Frasers stupid alter egos. Obviously you're not a fan of Fraser either. Sorry for jumping to conclusions but this whole gay poem trend is getting old as hell and I was getting a little sick of it.
Re: a comment on Recognition by nentwined	16-Feb-06/7:03 AM
If your not that guy who's been logging in with mock names like "zodlac" then you have real bad timing or you are apparently a big fan of him.
Re: a comment on Recognition by nentwined	16-Feb-06/6:53 AM
Well, we've got our suspect.
Re: a comment on To drnick by amanda_dcosta	16-Feb-06/6:25 AM
If you have to hold on to it then it ain't faith.
Re: A young Man’s Demise by Dovina	16-Feb-06/6:19 AM
He doesn't exist outside this poem but I'm sure he resembles quite a few people. I like the character you've made.
Re: a comment on Recognition by nentwined	16-Feb-06/5:52 AM
Here's a haiku: Jerk steals user names calling people gay alot- Leaves fuck you comments.
Re: a comment on To drnick by amanda_dcosta	15-Feb-06/7:49 PM
I guess in the Jerry McGuire you had me at hello way he does but that's not what I meant.
Re: a comment on To drnick by amanda_dcosta	15-Feb-06/7:48 PM
Thanks for the warning but my god is going to let people be who they'll be so I'm not worried. God might have drnick but he still is unaware of it so it only makes a difference to god not drnick and yet the Doc is still a good person, go figure.
Re: My Dad's Armchair. by Bethy	15-Feb-06/4:17 PM
Hey Bethy good to see you back. Happy Valentines day.
Re: a comment on Lost In Her Effervescence by ALChemy	15-Feb-06/4:14 PM
See definition 2 here: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=boiling I suppose I could have said "of a cold seething ocean" but then I'd have lost the juxtaposition.
Re: a comment on Journeyman by Glasseyez	15-Feb-06/2:45 PM
I think someone's been impersonating you lately. Check some of the recent 20 or 30 posts.
Re: a comment on To drnick by amanda_dcosta	15-Feb-06/2:31 PM
Before you write your poem ask yourself this: Was my life any less fulfilling when I once believed in Santa Claus?
Re: a comment on Lost In Her Effervescence by ALChemy	15-Feb-06/2:28 PM
Can't blame you, we men tend to oversimplify our feelings when expressing them.
Re: a comment on change (3rd draft) by Adriaan	15-Feb-06/2:14 PM
If only the Chinese invented Haikus.
Re: To drnick by amanda_dcosta	15-Feb-06/2:06 PM
Obviously drnick still thinks the best of you also and he doesn't have God to tell him he should.
Re: change (3rd draft) by Adriaan	15-Feb-06/6:17 AM
Good but you could have put more imagery in the second verse. Something like- Hermit sits: Child's name carved in bark Red leaves fall. Not that that's where you were going but you see what I mean?
Re: a comment on A Midnight Call by amanda_dcosta	15-Feb-06/5:59 AM
There is no pattern really. It's kinda like dancing. You hear the rhythm and melody in your head and you just go with it. Moves just come out of you and they lead into other moves and so on. It's like that but with words instead of dance moves.
Re: a comment on Happy 40th Anniversary by Dovina	15-Feb-06/5:49 AM
I think the site explains more about how it was done but I think you'll come to the conclusion that this is still quite remarkable, even wonderful.
Re: a comment on Lost In Her Effervescence by ALChemy	15-Feb-06/5:44 AM
It's about loving a girl that I know is someone elses. Hence the hot/cold and other juxtapositions. What I feel is one thing, what is real is another. Although I've never felt "swarming buGGles" when I was with a woman I certainly do look forward to it some day :) The poem sounds so passionate but in reality it's quite sad, that's the big let down I think. There's probably alot of men out there who missed the boat with you feeling like this poem and you don't even know it, you little heartbreaker you.