Re: a comment on =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	2-Mar-06/8:27 AM
But what about the children? Are you really planning on tainting their pure little eyes with such scandelous pornography or are you just going to talk about him eating a bologna sandwich and watching Tom and Jerry cartoons?
Re: a comment on =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	2-Mar-06/8:15 AM
I do but then afterwards I feel sad. So can you guess what I think of to make me happy again? If you guess right I'll 10 your next poem too.
Re: =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	2-Mar-06/8:05 AM
Titties.
Re: a comment on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	2-Mar-06/8:01 AM
Hey, I grew up watching Benny Hill, What can I say. Ps. Titties.
Re: a comment on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	2-Mar-06/7:42 AM
Teach yourself to be your own harshest critic. It's harder to do than you think.
Re: a comment on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	2-Mar-06/7:24 AM
So when she's looking at your raised telescope is she squinting or is she bug eyed or does it depend on whether it's cold out or not. Ps. If you trim the bushes around the telescope it'll look a little bigger.
Re: a comment on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	2-Mar-06/7:13 AM
I'll give you "Rosehip" but with "prism" doesn't a metaphor have to work both ways?
Re: a comment on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	2-Mar-06/7:10 AM
"I gather that your conversation on smoofle's last post turned to horse-screwing" -No, sorry, I never talk about my private life.
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	1-Mar-06/4:54 PM
No, I'd say mostly she holds on to a woody. God I'm going to hell for that one.
Re: a comment on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	1-Mar-06/4:50 PM
He's a young rooster so apperantly his cock isn't ready to doodle-doo yet.
Re: a comment on You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger	1-Mar-06/4:46 PM
Beware The Darth Anal P.I. I shall.
Re: a comment on A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	1-Mar-06/4:44 PM
And believe me, she knows the difference between a young cock and an old one. Sorry D, couldn't resist the joke:)
Re: a comment on You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger	1-Mar-06/4:35 PM
The most Yoda-esque comment ever I've read on this site that is. How's that?
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	1-Mar-06/4:33 PM
The ultimate meaning in life is that we are greater than God because God can't make plastic. Amanda is right (about all the stuff she said about you behind your back.) Don't bother asking, I'll never tell.
Re: A Failed Proposition Under The Night Sky by Ranger	1-Mar-06/4:23 PM
What's a "rosehip mist"? I looked it up and this is what I got: http://www.nzpacific.com/details.php?id=185&which=product I dont think "prism" is the right word. A prism is the object that devides the light, not the rainbow of color. You could try maybe Prismacolor which is a brand name but it basically means a rainbow of color. You could also say kaleidoscope or polychrome. The rest is really good.
Re: a comment on You Sang To Me In A Cathedral Chamber by Ranger	1-Mar-06/3:24 PM
That's the most Yoda-esque comment I've ever read on this site.
Re: There by Dovina	1-Mar-06/12:04 PM
I'd give you some words of inspiration like the others did but right now I've got to go curl up into a fetal position and weep quietly into my pillow.
Re: a comment on An Interview With King David by amanda_dcosta	28-Feb-06/4:55 PM
It was either Peter, Paul or Simon, one or two of them I forget.
Re: Simon's Legacy (draft) by Caducus	28-Feb-06/8:05 AM
I'd like to see a word after "mother" in L1 S2 to reflect the "womb sonic" line. To say my brother became my father might be a little less confusing in S3. I'm not sure how he managed hang himself from his firetruck. Some hardcore stuff here though.
Re: Depression by terbenaw	28-Feb-06/1:39 AM
Despise is neither a noun nor is it an adjective, except maybe in this sentence. Impressive stuff considering it's basically a long sustained whine.