| Re: Oh by sacred_poet_me |
8-Jun-05/6:47 PM |
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Nice song but I think it's a bit lengthy. -7-
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| Re: Life by sacred_poet_me |
8-Jun-05/6:45 PM |
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Sentimentally touching. It really taught me what life truly means. The words flowed smoothly, and the repetition of the word 'life' really enhanced the poem. My favourite part is when how s_p_m described the reminders by using the spectrum. It sounded really nicely. Also the ending was spectacular. âOne minute Iâm here, and the next Iâm gone. Into another dimension of darkness.âHe really portrayed death in an impressive and dramatic way. Nice wordplay.
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/9:20 PM |
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/9:19 PM |
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You thought it was an actual song too? LOL. Me 2. But Hendrimike actaully wrote it. Isnt that amazing?
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| Re: a comment on matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/8:23 PM |
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Really? Amazing. You could be a songwriter when you grow up. Unless you already are. It's probably so good that it sounds like a song. I dont think you've posted it under the wrong category. It's good. I wonder if others think it's a song too.
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| Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike |
7-Jun-05/8:08 PM |
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Hi. Just curious, where did you get the lyrics from? What song? I find the lyrics touching. Somehow. <7>
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| Re: Dreams by lil_evil_boi |
7-Jun-05/8:02 PM |
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Hopefully this poem wont cause another "discussion" again. Anyways, I dont really think the title is suitable for the poem so I need some ideas. Thanks~
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| Re: a comment on Best Friends by lil_evil_boi |
7-Jun-05/7:48 PM |
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Thanks once again. You ahve been VERY supportive.
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| Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi |
7-Jun-05/7:43 PM |
I absolutely didnt know about the 'Faith' poem in the Bible until numerous poeple bagan to discuss about this so called "plagiarized quote". And I'm not bluffing. This quote, or verse, derived from my father. When I was small, he used to always remind me of this verse. And tells me that the three most important qualities of a human are faith, confidence, and honesty. Also at that point all of the family members, including me, were atheists. We had no clue that this quote may be from some other text. As for where my father got this quote, he never told me. If this clarifies some of the disagreements and wonders, it's my pleasure to explain to the readers. Hopefuly this'll clear things up. Thanks.
PS(If you still think that I plagiarized this verse from the bible, and the whole story is just an excuse, I have nothing to say. Go ahead and believe what you think. I've shared the whole story related to this verse and if this didnt help, sorry.)
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| Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi |
7-Jun-05/10:17 AM |
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Due to the huge "discussion" and disagreement about the poem 'Faith', I decide to delete the poem to prevent further misunderstanding.
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| Re: a comment on Heaven or Hell by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/5:53 PM |
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| Re: a comment on True Love by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/5:46 PM |
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Thanks a million. Glad that you like this poem.
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| Re: a comment on True Love by lil_evil_boi |
6-Jun-05/5:46 PM |
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Thanks~ I'll try to improve.
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| Re: Lost by Spitfire07 |
4-Jun-05/7:00 PM |
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I like the rhyming in the poem. It really enhanced the fact that you're trying to tell the readers how this person is lost. Keep up the good work^^!!
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| Re: untitled by Spitfire07 |
4-Jun-05/5:46 PM |
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Cool lyrics...by the way..thanks for the 10:)!!
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| Re: a comment on Where I'm From by lil_evil_boi |
4-Jun-05/5:36 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Heaven or Hell by lil_evil_boi |
4-Jun-05/5:34 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Snow by lil_evil_boi |
4-Jun-05/1:38 PM |
You may think that poems do not hav to rhyme...but i lyk rhyming cuz i think it enhances the poem. So personal opinions r not welcomed here.
PS(Next time plz do not purposely sabotage my poems. Instead of voting "0" purposely and anonymously, you can try posting your comments. Thanks~)<---for "kev_wannabe"
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| Re: a comment on Snow by lil_evil_boi |
4-Jun-05/1:32 PM |
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Thankz for supporting me^^. You poem "A Backpack Full Of Dragons" is pure genius too. Thanks again~
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| Re: a comment on True Love by lil_evil_boi |
4-Jun-05/1:25 PM |
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U know..i could try that. I'll consider about it.
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