on Zodiac's Visit to Micky D's by Oej-Oej
13 Jun 2005, 1:27 PM
LOL!
Thanks for your input,however don't assume Why was written for the rankers here.As for going to your poem list and zeroing it?
Ah, the sweet sound of paranoia! Re: 4) At least get it right,it was strife, not life.:-)This poem was written to a paranoid, loves to inflict pain on others s.o.b. because they are a miserable person. A good friend, quite young, who writes poetry and was hovering on the suicidal border, was being reamed by this piece of shit about her poetry at work, and so I immediately wrote it, handed it to the creep and made my friend smile, so shoot me!
Re: Puncuation, yes, I admit it, I suck at it! Who could feel better being hopeless? Hope my puncuation was better on this so you'll like me, you'll really, really like me.
Oh shit. Someone already used that line. Thanks for the offer to join the Dark Side, but an invite wasn't necessary.
Ah, the sweet sound of paranoia! Re: 4) At least get it right,it was strife, not life.:-)This poem was written to a paranoid, loves to inflict pain on others s.o.b. because they are a miserable person. A good friend, quite young, who writes poetry and was hovering on the suicidal border, was being reamed by this piece of shit about her poetry at work, and so I immediately wrote it, handed it to the creep and made my friend smile, so shoot me!
Re: Puncuation, yes, I admit it, I suck at it! Who could feel better being hopeless? Hope my puncuation was better on this so you'll like me, you'll really, really like me.
Oh shit. Someone already used that line. Thanks for the offer to join the Dark Side, but an invite wasn't necessary.
replying on Life and Love by windyone
9 Jun 2005, 7:09 AM
typical popeye...Olive :-)
replying on Life and Love by windyone
2 Jun 2005, 4:30 PM
Ok and your test results are Zodiac? :-)
replying on Life and Love by windyone
2 Jun 2005, 2:40 AM
LOL! ok you got me! 10 and 9 :-)
on Life and Love by windyone
31 May 2005, 9:32 AM
I was at work...all my clients were asleep....first time I'd met my grandbaby......wanted to go home
replying on Life and Love by windyone
31 May 2005, 9:08 AM
whew! that's a relief! :-)
replying on Life and Love by windyone
31 May 2005, 7:58 AM
How sad....that everything needs to be analyzed...life is to be enjoyed
Even when poetry has a meaning, as it usually has, it may be inadvisable to draw it out... Perfect understanding will sometimes almost extinguish pleasure.
A. E. Housman
Even when poetry has a meaning, as it usually has, it may be inadvisable to draw it out... Perfect understanding will sometimes almost extinguish pleasure.
A. E. Housman
replying on Life and Love by windyone
30 May 2005, 8:51 PM
A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
Paul Valery
Paul Valery
replying on Life and Love by windyone
30 May 2005, 4:30 PM
quite so..obviously an escapee
on Gemini by angela5674
29 May 2005, 11:32 AM
nice...and it made sense
on The Gravity of Love by april fool
25 May 2005, 5:04 PM
let us know when you do
on Die tomorrow by little_big_nose
25 May 2005, 5:01 PM
been there done.... that time to split
on mountain creek by brazen
25 May 2005, 5:00 PM
good I liked this one
on Thinkin of ya! by KezzY20
25 May 2005, 4:26 PM
nice sentiments..prepsre for bashing comments from others
on you will feel by nentwined
25 May 2005, 4:24 PM
have a good trip
on The Son Of by malakin
25 May 2005, 4:24 PM
Excellent!I needed to read this today! Thanks
on Internet Prisoner by avwiz71
23 May 2005, 7:47 AM
Wonderful and hearwrenching Jon..thanks for sharing