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Die tomorrow (Free verse) by little_big_nose
I could die tomorrow So tell me anything you want to You may never see me again I will forever leave you I could die tomorrow Let me know how you feel Only good can come from this Maybe my wounds will heal I could die tomorrow You could help me survive Even though it's you that's killing me Your love keeps me alive

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10548
Posted: January 7, 2004 6:07 PM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2004 6:07 PM PST
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Comments:
[9] titan69 @ 62.31.23.102 | 8-Jan-04/2:30 PM | Reply
I dont think people see your full potenshall?
I think this is good 9/10
[n/a] little_big_nose @ 209.23.41.14 > titan69 | 8-Jan-04/3:04 PM | Reply
Thanx a lot man, most people just think i'm a sicdial teen...but i'm not. All my poems have a speical meaning, but I'm never gonna act on what i write
[6] windyone @ 63.245.189.142 | 25-May-05/5:01 PM | Reply
been there done.... that time to split
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