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Die tomorrow (Free verse) by little_big_nose

I could die tomorrow So tell me anything you want to You may never see me again I will forever leave you I could die tomorrow Let me know how you feel Only good can come from this Maybe my wounds will heal I could die tomorrow You could help me survive Even though it's you that's killing me Your love keeps me alive

titan69 8-Jan-04/2:30 PM
I dont think people see your full potenshall?
I think this is good 9/10




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